View Full Version : Xtreme TV 34: October 13th
Darkstar
10-10-2005, 07:52 AM
Key Arena, Seattle, Washington
Wednesday
Jimmy Redman and Brett Banner Vs Twiggie and Jordi Warner: Twig writing
Thursday
Boyo Vs Dante: Boyo writing
Friday
Non Title Tag Match
Arkham and Retromark Vs TIH and Tom Trash: Holt writing
Saturday
Sickness Vs Draven Cage: DS writing
Sunday
Evil Gringo Vs Chris Eagles: TGO writing
Ok, Boyo is starting the show at some point today. Have fun guys and remember that a short promo can be just as fun as a long one. ;)
han89
10-10-2005, 10:28 AM
since i dont have a match this week, and i dont want to write one (not feeling like doing one) i will be posting a promo i was trying to pass for the past 2 weeks but was unable to write. if no one else wants anything from me, i am taking this week off from writing. the promo is already written and will be posted after the start of the show. nice card, looking for evil gringo vs Eagles.
Yo, I'll take the tag match. Just send me the booking, and I'm good.
The Doctor
10-10-2005, 02:00 PM
Yo, I'll take the tag match. Just send me the booking, and I'm good.
Yes. Yes, you are. :xyx
I am thoroughly enjoying the BB and Twig clashes so far! Sorry I've been letting you get on with it and not posting as well, but I'm busy house sale finalising at the mo!
I'll see if I can get my arse in gear this show! :D
Yo yo yo,
The show has been started. It's a bit long but I
a) Wanted to write a fair bit to convey what I wanted
and
b) Usually get carried anyway anyway :P!!
I hope you like it.
Cheers!
PS: If it has been posted like, 4 times, this is because I kept on getting that "duplicate thread" message so like Napoleon Dynamite might say, "Ugh! Idiots!"
PPS: Cheers!
The B-Man
10-10-2005, 03:25 PM
No Jaxx or Gower wrestling. What will Jaxx be up to instead, how Angry is Gower? - Be sure to tune into TWO Xtreme where both men may make an appearnace:)
Christof
10-10-2005, 04:17 PM
Together perhaps? In a hot tub
5 points to the first person who could tell me Jaxx's first line in reaction:
han89
10-10-2005, 04:21 PM
I am thoroughly enjoying the BB and Twig clashes so far!
I am interested in knowing what did you think about the bret banner vs lonely avenger match last week. did i use your character right? was there anything wrong that i misused in your character? this would help me for further writings when i would have to use your character. cheers man! i really like Bret Banner, and i would be glad to feud with him later in TWOstars! :thumbsup
PS: Last week's twiggie/Banner chase was inventive, i liked it!
EDIT - Jaxx's First reaction (for you Christof): You rode me today even better then you ride the lightning! Man you are the master of Pain! Yet not any pain, you're a pain in the ass!
Christof
10-10-2005, 04:44 PM
EDIT - Jaxx's First reaction (for you Christof): You rode me today even better then you ride the lightning! Man you are the master of Pain! Yet not any pain, the pain in the ass!
Good attempt, but wrong
MrFill
10-10-2005, 04:45 PM
5 points to the first person who could tell me Jaxx's first line in reaction:
One word: ALLLLLLRIGHT!
Christof
10-10-2005, 05:03 PM
5 points to the Fillster!
Evil Gringo
10-10-2005, 05:25 PM
Unless TGO is taking the main event I'll have it...
I'll PM him about it and see what he says...
As i have pmed you mate i will take main event, It will give me a break from Eagles V Mills :)
Evil Gringo
10-10-2005, 06:09 PM
No promblem at all...
Also got the PM about the promo's etc so I will try and work that in to the show...
Evil Gringo
10-10-2005, 08:30 PM
Right now that the main event is sorted out I have put up a little promo...
Also I have a new nickname (thanks to Fill) and that is the Mexicutioner...
Which has given rise to the new catchphrase... Mexicute you ass!
Just everyone knows... plus it is now added to my TWOStars profile on the main profile page.
EDIT: Also after some thought I have renamed the GringoLock the Mexicution as well for when it comes back into useage on the 18th of this month... This is to fit in with the Gringo's lone wolf and angry face personna...
This is also added to my main profile.... and again the idea came from Fill... he loves me....
I'll be adding chapter 2 to the "Who done it?" storyline going on at the moment with Triple V
Promo should be up at some point tomorrow evening. This week i'll get cracking with this storyline
Colin
10-10-2005, 09:12 PM
I have no idea what I'm doing this week, I may address more serious concerns
Christof
10-10-2005, 09:25 PM
That loading area needs to be brought back under control, thats for sure
Colin
10-10-2005, 09:28 PM
Such horrific use of the ARMBAR last week
Evil Gringo
10-10-2005, 09:35 PM
And such flagrent and blantant useage after your banning too!
Chaos Colin, chaos... It needs sorting...
Whoops, just dropped another armbar. Twiggie never was one for authority figures, unless he's that figure.
Evil Gringo
10-10-2005, 10:07 PM
Just one thing...
In your promo you mentioned that the fan was a plant...
Why? Unless there is a plan of course.... It may be an e-fed but it is one where a plant wouldn't be identified as one because it would break the reality of the show...
Apart from that... good comic writing and nice progression of the Twiggie character and the Banner fued...
Slim Jim
10-10-2005, 11:18 PM
Rhyno got fired for that very thing.
Just one thing...
In your promo you mentioned that the fan was a plant...
Why? Unless there is a plan of course.... It may be an e-fed but it is one where a plant wouldn't be identified as one because it would break the reality of the show...
Apart from that... good comic writing and nice progression of the Twiggie character and the Banner fued...
I mentioned he was a plant because a real fed would never let a fan take a bump from one of their wrestlers. Also I didn't want to give him a name, or keep calling him a fan over and over. Sue me for breaking kayfabe. :P (did I use that properly?)
Dante
11-10-2005, 02:28 AM
Rhyno got fired for that very thing.
Well he's fueding for a title, so thats a step up. Points to Colin for calling in an emergency Botanist though. :thumbsup
Well he's fueding for a title, so thats a step up. Points to Colin for calling in an emergency Botanist though. :thumbsup
Umm, I'm not sure I understood that... Nope, I definately didn't get it. The "botanist" is what really threw me.
Christof
11-10-2005, 06:59 AM
Botanist - someone who looks after plants
Okey doke
VVV's first skit is up and aims to further the mysterys surrounding the TV champ
Any comments are very much welcomed
Colin
11-10-2005, 08:06 PM
I feel the arena needs a tampon
Dante
12-10-2005, 02:22 AM
In the words of "Dracula, Dead and Loving It" THERE'S SO MUCH BLOOD!! I wonder if Triple V is a hemophiliac?? Hmmm.......
Wow, interesting promo. It looks like that punk who used to like up the Taker with his laser pointer is after VVV now. Unless... you know, that looked a bit like an assasination attempt on the TV champ, didn't it?
Man, I'll say this much. It's hard to write for a wrestler (*cough*Jordi*cough*) who doesn't have any move set. Not to mention when that wrestler is in a tag match. I have to say that this is the most difficult match I've written yet. Not to worry, it'll be up by early tomorrow evening (no later than 8 o'clock Chicago time (that's six hours behind UK)).
By the way, on a completely unrelated issue, has Dante "The Assasin" Mueller picked his new victim yet? :roll :P
Dante
12-10-2005, 03:24 AM
What are you looking at me for? I was beaten to a pulp by Sickness remember? Its hard for me to be going after people when I have a GAPING head wound. Everytime blood is involved I get blamed....Geez.
What are you talking about? Sitting in a hospital will really give a guy time to think. I was seriously inquiring as to... as to... yeah I don't know where I'm going with this. :lol
EDIT- Finished the rough draft of the match. I'll edit it tomorrow at school. I may even be able to get it up by about 3 (again that's 9 o'clock UK time), but I'm not promising anything. Still, no later than 7 o'clock.
Just to advise that Dante vs Boyo could be up today instead of Thursday as I have (potentially) quite a busy day tomorrow. It may be before the Redman tag match, if that's ok?
Probably won't be, mind! :P
Dante's got some excellent brawling skills so hopefully I can get a good brawl vs techincal match going on. :)
Cheers!
han89
12-10-2005, 05:19 PM
well about the VVV promo, i loved it, couldnt enjoy Cole being humiliated more then that! Someone is trying to get Vengeance. could be anyone as i can see it right now, but if you dont want to BANG! the things up for everyone, i say chose to keep this mystery thing covered till the end and dont give away any clear hints! BANG! that was a nice promo.
As for my last promo, it is another mysterious thing tonight on the show, and more will follow to clear or complicate things later.
Darkstar
12-10-2005, 09:32 PM
quick little promo, have fun. ;)
Just to advise that Dante vs Boyo could be up today instead of Thursday as I have (potentially) quite a busy day tomorrow. It may be before the Redman tag match, if that's ok?
No need to worry, Boyo. I had plenty of time between classes to finish my ethics homework, and edit the match. It's up now. In time for all you Beefeaters ( :lol sorry ) to read it before you go to bed.
Ravenmark
12-10-2005, 10:27 PM
Please don't post anything for Retromark!
I have a promo going up tonight that will reveal his 'mark' for this week!
Ta!
Ravenmark
12-10-2005, 10:54 PM
Promo up - Hope you like. :)
Evil Gringo
12-10-2005, 11:52 PM
Fantastic parody Scott... Classic...
Just posted a little more build up to tonights main event and the current triangle between Gower, Gringo and Holt...
Hope you all like.
Gringo ... RM. You two rock. Excellent promos each.
I've just posted Dante vs Boyo and I am actuslly quite pleased with it. I got some of Dantes impact moves as well as Boyo's frustrating assholism. <--- (actual word.)
Hope you like it :).
Cheers!
Dante
13-10-2005, 03:19 PM
Nice match Boyo, I would have liked to win, but you know, you can't win them all. One thing though. I'm from Missouri not Montana. I'll change my profile as I probably just have MO on there.
Yeah it does/did have MO written there :P.
Cheers!
Dante
13-10-2005, 03:58 PM
I go the MO put as Missouri now and I also changed to the Killshot from "Modified Swanton" to "Modified Huston Hangover". Hope that clears up all the confusion from the last couple of week. :xyx
Well, you can be from this "Missouri" place next week. I ain't editing! :P
Cheers!
Excellent match Boyo. Great suspense, I really thought you were going to tap to the vampiric embrace. Don't be surprised if you notice some influences in my writing from now on. Oh and one more thing:
Tazz: He's a machine, Cole. A cold blooded machine. Cold-oiled, maybe.
Brilliant!
Colin
13-10-2005, 09:45 PM
I got bored again, someone should really distract me before I hit the post button
Colster, silly season is over buddy ;)
Colin
13-10-2005, 10:09 PM
Colster, silly season is over buddy ;)
You are clearly not familar with Atken of past :)
This is the man who previously walked around the arena with a megaphone to announce that his feud partner sucked the owners... yeah. Decided to bail out of a title defense due to lack of parking space and once decided to phone random enemys to inform them the show was cancelled so he didn't have to deal with him.
Edit: Did I mention he once sold his major shares in a company to a monkey?
Double Edit: Okay, I suck
Excellent match Boyo. Great suspense, I really thought you were going to tap to the vampiric embrace. Don't be surprised if you notice some influences in my writing from now on. Oh and one more thing:
Tazz: He's a machine, Cole. A cold blooded machine. Cold-oiled, maybe.
Brilliant!
Glad you liked it dude!
Sometimes I do produce odd little lines here and there that end up being quite funny. I remember one I did in ERE with Sickness and the line was along the lines of:
Boyo: That wasn't a lie Mr Sickness, it was a "terminological inexactitude"
Sickness: I hate termites and axes too, dude
Boyo: ...
Sickness: ...
Boyo: Do you even know what words mean?
It made me chuckle for a few moments anyway.
Cheers!
Evil Gringo
13-10-2005, 11:39 PM
Just a little backstage skit to put over the fact that Mills and Eagles are fueding (its the poster feature by the way) and also the fact that me and Eagles have a match...
Felt they had been left out by all the hoohah over me Holt and Gower.
Fidel Cashflow
14-10-2005, 12:01 AM
Just a little backstage skit to put over the fact that Mills and Eagles are fueding (its the poster feature by the way) and also the fact that me and Eagles have a match...
Felt they had been left out by all the hoohah over me Holt and Gower.
no idea why but the whole thing at the end with the Dr. Pepper's made by chuckle
Evil Gringo
14-10-2005, 12:04 AM
That was my intention...
Glad it got a laugh...
You like it then Sprial? Get the fued some good enough air time for you?
Fidel Cashflow
14-10-2005, 12:07 AM
That was my intention...
Glad it got a laugh...
You like it then Sprial? Get the fued some good enough air time for you?
you've done as much work for my fued as I've done myself :(
Evil Gringo
14-10-2005, 12:10 AM
Well all I can suggest is that you post more.... Thats if you can...
Seen as TGO has the No Mercy match you should at least brainstorm with him as to posts and ideas....
Christof
14-10-2005, 08:56 AM
you've done as much work for my fued as I've done myself :(
Well maybe if you at least tried to get your ass into gear TGO wouldn't be carrying you.
han89
14-10-2005, 05:10 PM
Well maybe if you at least tried to get your ass into gear TGO wouldn't be carrying you.
Well i agree with you on this. TGO must be recognized for his constant and great posting and quality feuds, and he should be showed some apreciation from Mills and everyone else. I aint saying he is being mistreated or misgiven matches or credit, but i just wanted to point that he is in my opinion the best member in TWOstars last month. :xyx
Fidel Cashflow
14-10-2005, 05:59 PM
Well maybe if you at least tried to get your ass into gear TGO wouldn't be carrying you.
you say that as if I'm being allowed to offer some creative input. Other than my final request i have no control whatsoever of the things that have/will be taking place
TGO is carrying this feud because the bookers have appearently decided it be that way.
MrFill
14-10-2005, 06:41 PM
And you can't further the feud by, I don't know, POSTING?
Colin
14-10-2005, 06:58 PM
I don't know anything I'm doing and I still post
MrFill
14-10-2005, 07:42 PM
Did you know that whether you're winning or losing, you should still post to help with the feud.
Imagine it in real life:
Eddie knew that he was losing at NM.
Eddie decides that since he's not winning, he'll be a lazy f***tard.
DAVE~! comes out and cuts a promo, referencing Eddie.
Eddie doesn't show up, because he knows that he's losing.
DAVE~! works his butt off in the feud.
The bookers see that Eddie is a lazy f***tard, so he never gets pushed again.
See? It happens in efeds too. :)
Christof
14-10-2005, 10:19 PM
Well my match is almost done but I am waiting for a promo from someone else before I can post it so it probably won't be up until the morning.
The B-Man
14-10-2005, 10:27 PM
Sorry for my lack of contribution this week guys. I actually can't think of anything to post when not busy:(
you say that as if I'm being allowed to offer some creative input. Other than my final request i have no control whatsoever of the things that have/will be taking place
TGO is carrying this feud because the bookers have appearently decided it be that way.
I didnt say thats what the bookers said, I just said i didnt want the type of match you wanted as it would give it away, And since i told you about the fued you said you was going to post two promos but all i see is ONE
Well i agree with you on this. TGO must be recognized for his constant and great posting and quality feuds, and he should be showed some apreciation from Mills and everyone else. I aint saying he is being mistreated or misgiven matches or credit, but i just wanted to point that he is in my opinion the best member in TWOstars last month. :xyx
There are alot better poster in TWOstars then me mate, there Boyo, MrFill, Barry, Christof, Colin, Ravenmark, Brett Banner (before moving), Gringo, Paulrog, Dante, If i have missed you out then you must be crap lol only joking :) Oh and Darkstar, I think thats all, And even you have done well, But you do need to think before posting some times :thumbsup
MrFill
15-10-2005, 01:53 AM
Just posted a quick skit - I know it's late in the week, but I wanted to get something up before the tag match.
I hope WM's words sound Warriorish enough.
I hope WM's words sound Warriorish enough.
They definately do. I thought the rope was a nice touch too.
han89
15-10-2005, 08:55 AM
Well TGO i know that some other posters are better but from the beginning of silly season till Halloween Havok, in my opinion, i think you were the member of the month. This month i think it's either Christof with Holt or Darkstar that are, In my opinion, members of this month. :thumbsup!
EDIT - Posted a promo to follow the one that was posted before. Hope you like it as part 3 will follow today.
EDIT - I just loved the Wurrurmark / Arkham promo. Mr Fill, that is a classic promo. Holtamaniacs? Now that was funny! :thumbsup
Darkstar
15-10-2005, 09:28 AM
ME???!!! Ive done next to nothing except keep the place running in between this job of mine! 3 weeks until the end of training: which means I will be back full time with old Sickness to cause havok! :D
MrFill
15-10-2005, 02:16 PM
EDIT - I just loved the Wurrurmark / Arkham promo. Mr Fill, that is a classic promo. Holtamaniacs? Now that was funny! :thumbsup
Holtamaniacs is taken directly from RM's promo earlier in the show - I just re-used it. :)
Christof
15-10-2005, 05:17 PM
Sorry it took an age, had a shitty day
The match is up, hopefully it continues a few things you may or may not have had questions about
Darkstar
15-10-2005, 06:28 PM
I really enjoyed the match Chris. Far and away the best you have done yet! :)
I second that. Fantastic match with an excellent use of the English language to mix it up and allow the match to flow
Some well thought out swerves in there with Atken coming out, Jaxx replacing RM, Warriormark doing commentary etc
Now that's how a tag match should be written. *Covers his match with a blanket*
Wow, Trash is in a bad way. Could this lead to a new "Self-destruction of Tom Trash" DVD?
Christof
15-10-2005, 08:43 PM
Was Warriormark ok? The comments I used were all real Warrior comments (even the New Orleans fishing one) and I know they are a bit out there.
Sorry if anyone found it a bit of a cluster**** of a match. I know i swerved it, changed the aprticipants etc but I got the right booking in the end.
It's a shame Trash is that way at the mo
Glad you guys liked the match, I felt it was the best I had written
Darkstar
15-10-2005, 09:51 PM
OK, and my match is up. Not my best yby a long way. But not bad given I didnt know I was writing it ALL until gone 4pm today! :D
Darkstar
15-10-2005, 09:51 PM
Actually, this is my first match in a while thanks to you guys all wanting to take the slack! :P
Great hardcore match (Almost makes me wish Sickness could win something to show that he's the best hardcore wrestler in TWOstars, but what? :P ) I just have one question, and don't think less of me for asking, but .... ... .... what's the "tommy hawk"?
Darkstar
15-10-2005, 11:43 PM
Bulldog, 3/4 Face Lock Reverse Crucifix
Used by : Tommy Dreamer
AKA : Tommyhawk (Dreamer)
Description : The attacker lifts the victim up so they are laying stomach first across the attacker's shoulder. The attacker places their hands under the victim's arms and extends their arms, so the victim is held in the air. The attacker pushes the victim up in the air. As the victim is falling to the mat, the attacker applies 3/4 face lock (basically, the victim's head on the attacker's shoulder with the attacker forming a headlock around the top of their head as the attacker has their back to the victim) and drops to the mat, impacting the victim's chin into the attacker's shoulder.
Basicly a stunner from an F5 position should give it basicly.
That was a frikkin' awesome match DS, it really was. Not only was it as entertaining as hell but it was one of the funniest...ANYthings I have read in a long time.
You really captured Boyo's complete asshole attitude on commentary too.
A great comedy/with serious undertones Dark Alliance match. Folks, if you want the kinda comic way to write about Sickness and Boyo - that's how you do it. :)
Cheers!
Promo up, hope it adds some clarity to what may be so far, through my own fault, a murky storyline between The Judge and Jordi Warner. Good times.
Main event is finally up now thanks to MrFill for giving me advise when i was very sleep :) cheers mate i would still be trying to write it if i didnt ask for help
Nice match. A good example of a well written, but short match. Mad props, dog! :8
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