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Christof
02-10-2005, 10:50 PM
Right folks
Title holders (myself particually included) please remember why you were given your titles. If you don't put the miles in don't expect to be holding the gold for too long.
It still seems some are not reading this. If you or anyone else is having issues with their availability or character then please speak to myself or Darkstar, we are here to help.
XTV 33 - October 6th
Delta Center, Salt Lake City, Utah
Tuesday
Violent Vinnie Vengeance vs Tony Coben & Mark Fforde: Telf writing
Wednesday
United States Title Match
Stipulation TBA
Tom "The Disciple" Trash vs "Wildboy" Keith Jaxx - The B-Man writing
Thursday
Philip Martin Akten & Arkham vs Sickness & Jordi Warner: MrFill writing
Friday
Twiggie vs The Judge
Saturday
Brett Banner vs The Lonely Avenger: han writing
Sunday
The Future (Darkstar & The Incredible Holt) vs Barry Gower & Evil Gringo - Christof writing
I will be starting the show tomorrow evening.
It is a pretty crammed show so please, make sure if you take a match that you can get it up on time
Cheers
Chris
Evil Gringo
02-10-2005, 10:52 PM
As always if there is anything you want from the Gringo then don't hesitate to ask...
Hope the main event was what was needed Christof... You like?
Christof
02-10-2005, 10:57 PM
Main event was great mate. Pressure certainly is stacked on me going into this week's ME. Nice.
Ravenmark
02-10-2005, 11:06 PM
I take it I'm not involved this week, selling the attack as deadmanmark?
The B-Man
03-10-2005, 12:30 AM
Any chance the Us Title match can be changed to earlier in the week please? Sa Wedensday or Thursday? - I will write it as well if that's not a problem
Christof
03-10-2005, 07:13 AM
Any chance the Us Title match can be changed to earlier in the week please? Sa Wedensday or Thursday? - I will write it as well if that's not a problem
Done just for you Baz
The B-Man
03-10-2005, 03:20 PM
Done just for you Baz
Much appreciated:)
I'll be taking the opening handicap match, so keep your filthy hands off! (I need to make up for my severe lack of posting on the last show)
MrFill
03-10-2005, 05:32 PM
Arkham will have to make an early appearance and find out that his "friends" aren't there, so expect much hilarity to ensue. Or something. :)
Dante
03-10-2005, 05:37 PM
I'll be doing a promo then. Time for the fun to begin.
han89
03-10-2005, 07:14 PM
i will take bret banner vs the lonely avenger. I have enough time to write a good match. please christof, send me the booking and the situation of the match, and i am still waiting a respond from you to that PM i sent you yesterday. Please respond asap! Thanks chris! :xyx
Darkstar
03-10-2005, 07:16 PM
hmmm, I doubt I can do the tag match. But I will give it a shot if no one else wants it by tomorrow morning.
MrFill
03-10-2005, 07:22 PM
If nobody else can take the tag match - I think I've got a free day later this week, so I could have a bash at it.
Darkstar
03-10-2005, 07:28 PM
OK, its all yours Fill. booking coming your way in a few.
Oh, Holt whos due to start the show? Ring me if nobody and I will do it early AM. :)
MrFill
03-10-2005, 07:29 PM
I will be starting the show tomorrow evening.
:D :D :D
Darkstar
03-10-2005, 07:33 PM
OOPS! Lol, oh, han and Telf I dont know the booking for your bouts so Holt will let you know. :)
OOPS! Lol, oh, han and Telf I dont know the booking for your bouts so Holt will let you know. :)
Triple V vs 2 Jobbers........ erm, I'll guess the finish ;)
Triple V vs 2 Jobbers........ erm, I'll guess the finish ;)
They are booked to beat you lol :P
Christof
03-10-2005, 08:28 PM
Bookings sent, MSN'ed, shipped, carrier pidgeon whatever.
Now to get the start put together
Christof
03-10-2005, 09:42 PM
The start of the show will be up during RAW. I'm going for a kip now so that i can watch it.
I'll take my match against The Judge. I'd prefer it pony express, but PM me if you must.
Ravenmark
04-10-2005, 01:48 AM
I have a promo prepared for this week if that's ok Christof?
Christof
04-10-2005, 01:58 AM
You are meant to be off the show for a couple of weeks scotty
Ravenmark
04-10-2005, 02:00 AM
OKey _ i'll save it then :)
Christof
04-10-2005, 02:53 AM
Its not a great start, but it is 2:52am!
Darkstar
04-10-2005, 07:30 AM
Darkstar has a BIG announcement for tonight! When I get in from work I will get it into the show. ;)
The Doctor
04-10-2005, 10:17 AM
So we have two shows this week then? :?
Christof
04-10-2005, 10:38 AM
Fixed that
Have posted a promo from following on from last weeks little skit. It shouldn't affect the tag match too much Mr Fill. :). The only thing I ask, as I will be sorta taking over the Sickness character as well as carrying with Boyo for the next few weeks, is that you (and this goes out to everyone) never have Sickness speak. He doesn't speak from now on, Boyo does all his talking.
Imagine Boyo looking like Christian but acting like Bobby The Brain or Jimmy Hart and you pretty much have it. Sickness, hopefully, will evolve into an early Brock Lesnar, Kane sorta gimmick.
Any questions feel free to PM me or post in these threads.
Cheers!
Darkstar
04-10-2005, 08:21 PM
OK, promo up (including Raven inspired comments;)). Enjoy.
First match is up too
As a squash match it obviously isn't that long. But the main purpose was to highlight the events before the match starts. It was slightly rushed, I did half last night before RAW and the other half just now - i'm falling asleep as i type :sleep
Comments welcomed as always
The B-Man
06-10-2005, 01:13 AM
Jaxx match will be up before I go to bed, still working on it at the minute.
Ravenmark
06-10-2005, 01:46 AM
Like the '1PW Raven inspired promo' Darkie :)
MrFill
06-10-2005, 03:51 AM
Match up early for me, but on time for you guys.
Looks like Baz and I have gone mad posting. :D
Sooooo... may I write my match vs the Judge or no?
Evil Gringo
06-10-2005, 12:08 PM
Good show so far, nice work from Baz and Fill....
Just added to it myself as well with a little hype segment with Grish and Gringo...
Enjoy.
MrFill
06-10-2005, 01:47 PM
In case anyone is wondering... Warner is "already in the ring" as his profile has no Entrance - he doesn't do anything in the match as he has no moves listed.
I've taken it as he just tells people that he fights that way, but he hasn't backed it up, yet. :P
In other words - update the profile, Dra. :P :P
MrFill
06-10-2005, 04:59 PM
Sorry for the double post.
A little bit of humour - if you've read The Best of Gower DVD, you should understand the reference. :)
Sooooo... may I write my match vs the Judge or no?
PM Christof or Darkstar for the booking. I shall be posting a promo pre-match hopefully.
Dante
06-10-2005, 06:35 PM
In case anyone is wondering... Warner is "already in the ring" as his profile has no Entrance - he doesn't do anything in the match as he has no moves listed.
I've taken it as he just tells people that he fights that way, but he hasn't backed it up, yet. :P
In other words - update the profile, Dra. :P :P
I think Warners old profile is in the face thread of the proile section. If not add me to your MSN and I'll send it to you.
MrFill
06-10-2005, 06:45 PM
I think Warners old profile is in the face thread of the proile section. If not add me to your MSN and I'll send it to you.
Here's Warner's current profile:
http://twostars.ex-rev.com/index.cfm?action=PU&ID=36&PRID=2
I believe that when he returned he was meant to be more of a wrestler, but it's not on the profile. :P :D
Wasn't so impressed by the tag match, Fill - I usually expect better from you buddy. There wasn't any mention of the fact that Warner had been Powerbombed to hell earlier in the show by The Dark Alliance (although his impassiveness may be able to answer those questions?).
Plus I'm a bit gutted that despite my "Sickness as a silent destroyer" promos he gets pinned by a kick in the balls.
Cheers!
MrFill
06-10-2005, 07:17 PM
To be honest, I wrote it really quickly, wanted to get it out of the way, so I didn't treat it like a real match.
I forgot that he had been powerbombed - the booking I had been given was that Sicky was pinned along-side Warner, so I wanted to get him down quickly.
Darkstar
06-10-2005, 07:22 PM
PMAs finisher IS the Nutshot, so hey ho. Given the time constraints thats not too bad a match TBH. Thanks for that Fill. :)
Tell you what boyo, We'll kick you in the balls and see how quickly you getup eh?
Saz
Colin
06-10-2005, 07:48 PM
Tell you what boyo, We'll kick you in the balls and see how quickly you getup eh?
Saz
That was my logic in using it as a finisher :)
If its hogan though he wouldnt sell it lol
The B-Man
06-10-2005, 08:39 PM
Loved the promo Colin superb stuff:D
Christof
06-10-2005, 08:46 PM
For those that don't know there is an issue with the Main Event. I called Paul last night, somehow it slipped my mind that I am in Stockholm this weekend.
I'll get something sorted but Paul will be doing something as well.
Colin
06-10-2005, 08:48 PM
Loved the promo Colin superb stuff:D
When I get bored, my writing style reflects the complete insanity that goes on in my mind
The B-Man
06-10-2005, 10:37 PM
For those that don't know there is an issue with the Main Event. I called Paul last night, somehow it slipped my mind that I am in Stockholm this weekend.
I'll get something sorted but Paul will be doing something as well.
If you need me to do send me the booking.
Darkstar
06-10-2005, 10:45 PM
And Chris, let me know if you have asked Baz to do it (or not) so I know if Im doing anything still! :P
Evil Gringo
06-10-2005, 10:51 PM
Hell if any of you guys need the Gringo then send it my way... I'm sure I can knock something together...
Otherwise all is cool.
The B-Man
06-10-2005, 10:52 PM
Hell if any of you guys need the Gringo then send it my way... I'm sure I can knock something together...
Otherwise all is cool.
If Gringo can take it then let him I was offering cause I think someone in the match should always write it first:)
Evil Gringo
06-10-2005, 10:59 PM
Well I will take it and its only fair as you've already written a match and a shed load of segments for this weeks show so its time someone took the load as well...
So if Darky and Holt give me their blessing (and their booking for it) I shall take the main event and have it up around... 8pm to 9pm Sunday night...
That okay?
Darkstar
06-10-2005, 11:23 PM
I dont know the booking! Im just going to drag some stuff forwards a bit to make a decent ending! :D
Evil Gringo
06-10-2005, 11:36 PM
People, people...
Lets not have a clusterf**k please...
Someone send me the booking and I will do my best...
Either that or I'll just do a shoot!
I put up a little build to my match, but feel free to post promos before the match starts.
MrFill
07-10-2005, 01:51 AM
*chants*
Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot!
What? Oh, sorry. :D
The B-Man
07-10-2005, 03:03 AM
*chants*
Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot! Shoot!
What? Oh, sorry. :D
Keith Jaxx is bad enough don't encourage:P
Christof
07-10-2005, 04:19 PM
You see, because this wasn't taken heed of:
Title holders (myself particually included) please remember why you were given your titles. If you don't put the miles in don't expect to be holding the gold for too long.
This happens:
Jaxx gets back to his feet where he drags Trash closer to the near left hand corner of the ring.
MC: This is the end, Tazz.
Tazz: No way, this can’t happen.
Jaxx having positioned Trash ascends to the top rope to a loud pop from the crowd. Jaxx then jumps off the top rope bring his legs crashing down onto Trash to a huge pop from the crowd.
MC: Jaxx 3000!!!!
Tazz: Damn it.
Jaxx repositions himself then hooks the leg of Tom as he looks for the cover.
One
Two
Three
Ding Ding Ding
TC: Ladies and Gentlemen here is your winner and NEWWWWWWWWWWW Untied States Champion, “Wildboy” Keith Jaxx!!!
Huge pop from the crowd.
MC: He did it, Tazz. He did it.
Tazz: For the love of god. We can’t have this represent the company as it’s U.S. Champion.
MC: Well believe it.
Jaxx is handed the title is told to remove the trousers of Trash, but Jaxx shakes his head in a no motion before dropping the belt followed by his bags(Trousers)!
Congrats Mr Jaxx
Just posted a little backstage skit
Christof
07-10-2005, 06:49 PM
I got a backstage skit up, it isn't great though
Colin
07-10-2005, 07:43 PM
I got a backstage skit up, it isn't great though
I laughed, I dunno why, but I did, just wish I could've added a cut away to Atken for it :)
han89
07-10-2005, 08:50 PM
what the f***? Keith Jaxx became new US champ? Christof, you are confusing me with this. would you please PM me and tell me what is exactly going to happen at No Mercy? Thanks you,because now i am totally lost.
EDIT - ( just clearing out, i will be writing the US title match for No Mercy, no matter who the champion was and who the number 1 contender is, i already talked to christof about this - so i did not give anything out in this post like the B man said).
The B-Man
07-10-2005, 09:02 PM
what the f***? Keith Jaxx became new US champ? Christof, you are confusing me with this. would you please PM me and tell me what is exactly going to happen at No Mercy? Thanks you,because now i am totally lost.
Number 1 - I don't think the swearing is needed here.
Number 2 - Christof books the Us Title so if he wants to have it change 100 times before No Mercy it's his call.
Number 3 - I don't remember you being made no.1 contender I apologise if I missed that, but No Mercy is still a few weeks away so if you want to tell everyone your matches, then the element of suprise is lost.
han89
07-10-2005, 09:14 PM
Number 1 - I don't think the swearing is needed here.
Number 2 - Christof books the Us Title so if he wants to have it change 100 times before No Mercy it's his call.
Number 3 - I don't remember you being made no.1 contender I apologise if I missed that, but No Mercy is still a few weeks away so if you want to tell everyone your matches, then the element of suprise is lost.
1) The swearing is from the surprise of seeing Jaxx as a champion. It isnt because of the change, it is because of the the surprise!
2) I know that. I guess that is the head booker's job.
3) i said my match, meaning the match i am writing. I talked to christof and i am going to be writing the US title match. I did not give anything away. I ment by my match the match i am writing.
Clearing things out.
MrFill
07-10-2005, 09:15 PM
For all we know, Trash could get a rematch and the title put back on him.
Since NM is 3+ weeks away, you've got tons of time to work on any match.
As Baz said, Christof books it, so it's up to him if he wants to change the Champ. :)
MrFill
07-10-2005, 09:17 PM
3) i said my match, meaning the match i am writing. I talked to christof and i am going to be writing the US title match. I did not give anything away. I ment by my match the match i am writing.
Actually you did - in the NM creative you mentioned the US Title match with Trash.
You've edited it now, but it did give away the match.
han89
07-10-2005, 09:21 PM
well that was a wrong hint. i am sorry for that, but that was the booking until then. now it is changed i think, and i did not spoil anything for anyone. This is what i am trying to say. nothing is sure for now, and the booking has changed for No Mercy.
Christof
07-10-2005, 09:32 PM
Han
1) I never said your match was a US title match
2) I also told you to watch this weeks show before starting your match
3) I am going away for the weekend and will deal with this on monday.
han89
07-10-2005, 09:41 PM
Then this is a big misunderstanding Christof. It is my fault, i misunderstood your PM and i am sorry for guessing things that are not true. Everyone, forget what i said up there, nothing of it is true. Will wait for monday to see what is going on Chris.
I thought No Mercy was next week, i dont know what gave me the allusion of it, maybe it was the Foley/Orton/Piper segment this week, which i watched half asleep. This is why i was rushing things up, and this is why this whole thing was confused.
PS: Have fun wherever you're going Christof! :xyx
Darkstar
07-10-2005, 09:49 PM
BTW, hope you all enjoyed the promo I posted. :D
Just posted the Twig/Judge match. His victory may come under some scrutiny due to PMA's new rules, but I had the match written before that. He could be fined or something. Or, if need be it can be easily changed.
Anywhoo, what did you think of the match. I feel it's my best to date.
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The Crippler, eh DS? I'm not sure who he is, I'll go searching for anything I can find on him.
Wow, thats all I can say, Im somewhat stunned.
Thanks, it just flowed forth. It's strange, because I didn't have nearly as much time to write as I usually do.
Darkstar
08-10-2005, 08:16 AM
Oh, who said it was Crippler? Im just throwing out promos! Ever hear of misdirection? ;)
mm hmmmm *eyes DS suspiciously* ... Well either way, he must have been good to envoke such a reaction from the crowd. I think I'll do some digging, "To cover all my bases". :D :P ;)
DIG...
DIG....
Dig...
dig...
dig...
Hmm, all I could find was that this "Crippler" fellow was the first intercontinental champ. A Pat Paterson, if you will. (He was the first IC champ right? <_< ... >_> )
Darkstar
08-10-2005, 04:48 PM
Anyone know whats happening this Sunday? Anyone been given the booking?
If no one knows by tonight I will assume its mine to sort.
Darkstar
08-10-2005, 04:49 PM
Hmm, all I could find was that this "Crippler" fellow was the first intercontinental champ. A Pat Paterson, if you will. (He was the first IC champ right? <_< ... >_> )
Also former ERE champion and a part of the greatest fued in ERE history (Crippler and Deadman).
The B-Man
08-10-2005, 06:46 PM
Also former ERE champion and a part of the greatest fued in ERE history (Crippler and Deadman).
Was the longest reigning champ in ERE.
Faced Gower one on one once and lost:P
(Crippler) faced Gower one on one once and lost:P
Snap!! If you aks me sounds like Gower deserves a title shot :lol :P
MrFill
08-10-2005, 07:36 PM
Snap!! If you aks me sounds like Gower deserves a title shot :lol :P
Yeah, at the US Title.
Who is the US Champ again? :D
The B-Man
08-10-2005, 07:37 PM
Yeah, at the US Title.
Who is the US Champ again? :D
Suck my ????
Evil Gringo
08-10-2005, 08:07 PM
Sunday is my reponsiblity Darkie.... I got it covered, I got the booking and a little idea from Baz as well.
han89
08-10-2005, 10:47 PM
i am unable to post my match due to bad internet connection. it took me 30 minutes to open this page and post this message, so a match would be impossible to post right now. i will do it really early in the morning, really early, around 8:00 or 9:00 am, when the connection is hopefully better. damn you internet!!!
Colin
08-10-2005, 10:52 PM
Internet is hard!
Internet is hard!
Then you die!
Saz
P.S. I was going to go for an internet porn joke, but it's been done.. againand agian and again!
I was going to go for an internet porn joke, but it's been done.. againand agian and again!
I think you just made one... yeah, ya did.
Evil Gringo
09-10-2005, 09:41 AM
Main event will be up tonight at around 9pm people....
If this is too late then Darky just say...
Otherwise get promoing and building etc, you have at the end of this post...
11 hours and 19 minutes....
han89
09-10-2005, 10:31 AM
finally!!! the internet connection is back again normally. i will post the match as soon as possible, which would be in five minutes or so. this is a good match, maybe the best one i have wrote so far. i need some feedback and comments, a lot of comments, on my match.
i need to know if you think my writing skills have improved compared to the first matches i have wrote. please people, be honest and i am waiting for your comments!!!
:thumbsup :xyx :thumbsup :xyx
Darkstar
09-10-2005, 02:32 PM
Not a bad match Han, I am very impressed given English isnt your first language. Keep on at it buddy, you improve every week.
It was rather good, you really are improving. I got a smile out of the "Twiggie for mayor" signs. One piece of advice I can give is the same one as MrFill once gave me: To add a little to the suspense, suddenly cut away from a big move before saying exactly what it was. Then have Tazz and Cole freaking out calling the name, and how devestated the opponent is from it.
Evil Gringo
09-10-2005, 08:57 PM
I beleive that technique is copyright of the Gringo...
People the main event is just being finished... I'll have it up before 10pm
MrFill
09-10-2005, 09:00 PM
I mentioned that you did it really well Pingu - not sure it's copyright you though. :P
It's always good to take from other people and incoporate them into your style - don't copy wholesale (yes, we've seen that), just improve your style by taking ideas onboard.
Darkstar
09-10-2005, 09:05 PM
Oh, the next weeks booking will be up tomorrow morning as i dont see me being up at 10PM. Boyo will be starting the show.
I beleive that technique is copyright of the Gringo...
People the main event is just being finished... I'll have it up before 10pm
Actually it is an english writers trick, used to build suspense as the novel writers handbook explained to me.
The reader can sometimes be shocked as the mind follows a path of prediction as they read a sentence, suddenly a confusing break in the line of thought will bring the action directly to the reader.
e.g. Peter looked about warily, he knew he had been stalked, but by what he did not know. It was his leg snapping between the jaws of the werewolf that he heard first.
Saz
Evil Gringo
09-10-2005, 10:13 PM
Even though it might not be registered as updated the main event is up as of now!
Go read and then tell me your thoughts... The ending good enough for you guys?
Ravenmark
09-10-2005, 11:31 PM
I really liked the main event Gringo - well done mate.
The B-Man
09-10-2005, 11:33 PM
Good main event I have one slight issue about the ending which I have Pm'd you about.
You built a good sense of suspence, Gringo. I liked it.
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