View Full Version : TWOStars Xtreme TV 27- August 25th booking
Darkstar
22-08-2005, 02:59 PM
Ok the show this week is in the FedExForums in Memphis Tennesee.
Wednesday
Jimmy Redman Vs Dante Vs MDM Chris Eagles- han writing
Thursday
TV Title match
The Judge Vs VVV- Paulrog writing
Friday
Tag Titles match
The Dark Alliance Vs Arkham and Retromark- Boyo writing
Weekend
King Holt Vs Acid Christ DS writing
I need writers as you can see. I will be starting the show tonight some time.
Christof
22-08-2005, 04:04 PM
Hey! I was doing this :P
Only kidding old chap!
Slim Jim
22-08-2005, 04:33 PM
So has WCW mode started now?
Colin
22-08-2005, 04:41 PM
I thought I started it last night :)
Darkstar
22-08-2005, 05:36 PM
Hey! I was doing this :P
Only kidding old chap!
Thought i'd give you an easy night! You have to make up to Paula being stuck in a room with AC screaming. Not to mention me screaming! :(
Evil Gringo
22-08-2005, 08:13 PM
Posted a little something... which I accidently did first in Mamacita's name seen as shes been on and I didn't check before typing...
Hope it works and DS... It shall be the bridge and beginning to what we talked about on MSN...
han89
22-08-2005, 11:16 PM
a question...in my next promo i will be needing michael cole gone for a few minutes in the show...like for 10 minutes..he is supposed to be asked to go to a locker room where he will find the lonely avenger there and he would send a message later in the ring that TLA would have gave him...can i do that?
Evil Gringo
22-08-2005, 11:19 PM
Must you use Cole? Can't you use Todd Grisham like the rest of us? Or anybody WWE type related who backstage announces...
han89
22-08-2005, 11:25 PM
i want to use cole because he is known to be the most cowardly announcer in the history of wrestling...and i need someone who really fears me to be summoned to me. it wont affect the matches...i would have part one of my promo posted...then wait for another promo to go underway..and then add part two and that is it..Cole is back....is it ok or do i use someone else? i would prefer Cole because he is the best man for this job.
Evil Gringo
22-08-2005, 11:29 PM
Just so long as everyone remembers and mentions it then it should be ok I reckon then... So everyone take note if you need Cole for some comments after Han's promo...
han89
22-08-2005, 11:35 PM
only one person will not be using Cole and that is the person posting his promo after me....after i do part one...someone will post a promo..i dont know who...and that person will have to remember not to use Cole...then after it, i will post part two of my promo and then Cole will be back on the show, with a lot of fear on his pale face and some wet pants...
I will take Judge/VVV If Telf doesnt mind
MrFill
22-08-2005, 11:53 PM
Is Boyo finishing the tag match?
If not, if you can PM it to me so far, I'll complete it :)
Sorry wont be able to write my match this week :( rubbish shifts at work
Darkstar
23-08-2005, 12:29 AM
han please do not use Cole. There are pleanty of other people you can use. I dont want our announcers taken away from ringside, it doesnt happen on TV and its not happening here without a damned good reason. Use Grishom, or Styles, heck even use Jerry Lawler.
I will take Judge/VVV If Telf doesnt mind
Yup, no worries - i'm gonna be writing a little something that i'd liked you to plonk in before the match if that's ok? I'll PM that to you tonight
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 06:56 AM
Can the writer of the tag match let me know the gimmick I am using this week or if it's undecided, because I'd like to stick in a promo.
Thanks :)
MrFill
23-08-2005, 07:38 AM
If Boyo's using the start of the tag match that was meant to be at SummerSlam, why not just use that gimmick? Saves him re-writing it :)
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 08:00 AM
That's what I meant Fill - sorry I was unclear.
I need to know the gimmick I was supposed to use for Summerslam so I can write a promo.
Evil Gringo
23-08-2005, 08:14 AM
You where Lance Stormark.... Or so I was lead to believe...
Remember... you own the lamest shot in TWOStars...
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 08:21 AM
That was the extreme TV before Summerslam.
Evil Gringo
23-08-2005, 08:48 AM
I thought seen as Summerslam was in Canada that the gimmick was carrying over? Ah well, my bad.
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 09:04 AM
I thought seen as Summerslam was in Canada that the gimmick was carrying over? Ah well, my bad.
Normally I would have - but I think that Lance Stormark is a Calgary exclusive :P
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 09:05 AM
Edit: Ignore.
han89
23-08-2005, 10:47 AM
han please do not use Cole. There are pleanty of other people you can use. I dont want our announcers taken away from ringside, it doesnt happen on TV and its not happening here without a damned good reason. Use Grishom, or Styles, heck even use Jerry Lawler.
ok i wont use Cole...if you insist on not using it then i wont..that is why i asked in the first place...to see if it would be good or not to use him...if it is not..then i wont..i will think of something else then...
Christof
23-08-2005, 11:59 AM
Han
Thank you for taking heed of Darkstar's words.
Please cut out the ... and use the traditional .
Cheers
Chris
Can the writer of the tag match let me know the gimmick I am using this week or if it's undecided, because I'd like to stick in a promo.
Thanks :)
Hey man I'm writing the tag match.
I'm going to completely re-write it from scratch because, hopefully, me and ol' DS have got an angle ready - the Sickness arrested angle.
Ravenmark, it's your choice who you want to be this week, however, can I ask that this person is a high-flier, as I have some neat big man/little man spots in my head for you and Arkham.
Cheers!
The B-Man
23-08-2005, 01:56 PM
I was lead to believe you were just using Retromark but then again sometimes nobody has a clue what's going on anyway:P
Slim Jim
23-08-2005, 02:28 PM
He is a hotty!
Legend stuff.
Ravenmark
23-08-2005, 03:04 PM
I posted a little promo, hope it's ok.
Evil Gringo
23-08-2005, 03:26 PM
Its a scream....
Massive laughter in the office over the Arkham line... "Can I show you my worm?"
Great work Marky....
Evil Gringo
23-08-2005, 11:36 PM
Posted a little something to keep mine and Darkstars little fued going....
A special match is brewing... watch this space...
Christof
24-08-2005, 08:09 AM
The silly season doesn't start until next week, but starting the feuds so they are ready to go is perfectly ok.
The silly season doesn't start until next week, but starting the feuds so they are ready to go is perfectly ok.
Should I postpone that angle I told you about untill after Halloween Havok?
Christof
24-08-2005, 07:12 PM
Yes please chap
MrFill
24-08-2005, 09:37 PM
Anyone else think that Colin's had a few too many to drink? :P
Darkstar
24-08-2005, 09:43 PM
Made me grin. :)
Colin
24-08-2005, 09:43 PM
Anyone else think that Colin's had a few too many to drink? :P
Don't doubt my master plan :)
MrFill
25-08-2005, 04:26 AM
A little something to remind people that Arkham's friends are the lumberjim's, erm, I mean lumberjacks :D
han89
25-08-2005, 01:10 PM
the triple threat match will be on in a few hours, the latest early tonight. I am still working on it and have done most of it, but i am still adding a few last touches to it. cheers.
han89
25-08-2005, 08:34 PM
the triple threat match is now posted with a little surprise at the end.
tell me how do you find it for it is my very first TWOstars match that i write on the real show, not the training. I really would apreciate and good or negative comments.
:thumbsup for, hopefuly, a good start in writing.
Just a few points Han,
1) Dave Hebner? Don't think he's reffed since the 80's - we use his nephew, Brian around here
2) A fair few typos and bad english but much better from what we usually see from you
3) I assume this feud that seems to be starting between you and Eagles is for silly month as you both seem to be playing heel characters at the mo
Apart from that it was a fairly decent match. There were a lot of "high" spots but not too much going on in between. These spots read much better if they come after a spell of normal action - yet still an enjoyable read, well done
han89
25-08-2005, 09:37 PM
Just a few points Han,
1) Dave Hebner? Don't think he's reffed since the 80's - we use his nephew, Brian around here
2) A fair few typos and bad english but much better from what we usually see from you
3) I assume this feud that seems to be starting between you and Eagles is for silly month as you both seem to be playing heel characters at the mo
Apart from that it was a fairly decent match. There were a lot of "high" spots but not too much going on in between. These spots read much better if they come after a spell of normal action - yet still an enjoyable read, well done
sorry for the referee thing. i confused names. my bad. will change it next time.
as for the english mistakes, please forgive me for that but i am trying to work it out.
i am glad to hear you liked the match. it could have been better but it was a quick written match. i had today only to write it and i was in a rush.
but as long is it is not bad, i am happy about it! :thumbsup
Darkstar
25-08-2005, 10:45 PM
Many thanks for that Han, you got me out of a bind there bud. :)
han89
25-08-2005, 10:49 PM
Many thanks for that Han, you got me out of a bind there bud. :)
no problem Darkstar. it is me who should be thanking you for the chance you gave me. thumbs up man, thumbs up :thumbsup. looking forward to the rest of the show!
Right the tag match is up. I had a lot of fun with the lumberjacks and hopefully made some funny, with a touch of very gruesome, lumberjack spots.
I had lots of technical wrestling planned originally but with these characters (Arkham and Retro), it's much easier to go all out and do something much more surreal, even before Halloween Havoc ;).
I'll save the 30 page techfest for my match with Gower, if we're allowed, and if he's up for it in the near future? Would be a good match methinks. We already have an angle: Gower wants to see Sickness in a dress. ;)
Cheers!
Darkstar
26-08-2005, 11:20 PM
I LOVED that match Boyo! Frikkin well done, made me chuckle throughout, good to see Arkham and Retro with the gold. :)
DAMN should have looked at show first, DARKSTAR wheres the spoiler tag :(
Darkstar
26-08-2005, 11:27 PM
lol, that will teach you! The feedback on a match always goes here! Why would tonight be any different? :P
Slim Jim
26-08-2005, 11:30 PM
There should be *** in the title.
Darkstar
26-08-2005, 11:31 PM
No, no there shouldnt!
There should be *** in the title.
Tremendous observational wit. That tickled me good.
Cheers!
han89
27-08-2005, 12:06 AM
this is one of the best matches i have ever read. who's idea was the lumberjims...i mean lumberjacks being what they are? whoever did create them is one great writer. the match is really good Boyo. it is the first one i read by you, and i really enjoyed it.
this is one of the best matches i have ever read. who's idea was the lumberjims...i mean lumberjacks being what they are? whoever did create them is one great writer. the match is really good Boyo. it is the first one i read by you, and i really enjoyed it.
Cheers dude! Glad you liked it. :)
Christof came up with the idea of Hulk Hogan lumberjacks, but I thought of going whole hog and making the Bearded Lady ;).
Cheers!
MrFill
27-08-2005, 12:45 AM
The original idea for the lumberjacks was mine - the idea was to have loads of Retro's old persona's there, but obviously jobbers wearing the outfits - not that Arkham would have noticed :P
Just about to read the match
MrFill
27-08-2005, 02:24 AM
Fun little match there Boyo - loved Arkham's failed Worm :D
Ok i have posted a little promo hope you all like it (it was going to be a little promo but some how its 5 pages) so let me know what you all thing and Han i need to speak to you about something on MSN i will be on some time tonight (it is 4:08am lol) ok mate
Jimmy Redman
27-08-2005, 05:13 AM
Loved the tag match, great stuff.
Seen as how RM was being refered to as "GMSmark", it made me think it was "GM Smark"..
"My friendsies will be at the Lumberjims~!"
"Thats great Arkham, not that it really matters anyway, because that selfish beyatch DS wont want to give up his precious tag belt, and well he is booking the damn thing, so we've not got a lick. And Mamacita must secretly be DS's daughter, because Gringo has had the title for 5 months now. Talentless scum from "OMFG BESTEST FED IN TEH WORLD~!" ERE are taking valuable airtime from TWO Superstars, Silly Season is teh GAYEST.IDEA.EVER~! By the way, Cena sucks, Hogan sucks, Angle rulez, and oh yeah I'm in love with Dave Meltzer. I know we're not supposed to mention the *gasp* WWE, but this is a SHOOT COWBOY~!"
Cut to commerical brake.
Ravenmark
27-08-2005, 06:32 AM
Good match, Boyo, really enjoyed it.
And Jimmy - I don't know what you mean :P
han89
27-08-2005, 11:18 AM
good promo TGO. i really enjoyed it. You are beginning to understand what my character is all about. I really liked it.
there is one thing though, it is the GREEN Hells not just HELL. besdie that, it was a good promo.
cheers! thumbs up :thumbsup
PS: I may not be able to go online on MSN tonight. If i can, i will, if i can't, then we will talk later, tomorow maybe.
Christof
27-08-2005, 07:04 PM
there is one thing though, it is the GREEN Hells not just HELL.
Woah! More than one hell?
han89
27-08-2005, 11:12 PM
Woah! More than one hell?
its not more then one hell. its just that the when you talk about the green hell, it us usualy the green hells, when i first read that it was called the green hellS. i liked it and took it for my character. its somewhat abstract, because there is no more then one hell, and the green hells symbol to something even scarier then the real hell. that is what it is suposed to mean.
MrFill
28-08-2005, 01:35 AM
It depends if you're looking at Hell or the levels of Hell
From Dante's Inferno, there are multiple levels, so therefore the "green hell" could just be one of those levels of hell :)
Christof
28-08-2005, 10:15 PM
Folks, I've just got in after an 11 our day playing cricket and am thoroughly knackered. So I'm going to have an early night and post the match and next week's booking tomorrow.
Christof
29-08-2005, 10:51 PM
Sorry boys and girls, its been a busy old day. I hope the match is ok. I was told at late notice that it was meant to be brutal so I changed the ending.
Christof
30-08-2005, 11:02 AM
Bit of feedback please folks, other than it was a day late.
Was it a suitable and brutal enough start to a championship reign?
Evil Gringo
30-08-2005, 11:04 AM
Ouch, poor AC is all I can say... Sets you up nicely as a monster heel champion of course. More acts like that and anyone that goes up against you should be a monster underdog face instantely, which is great for creating a match dynamic when writing...
Put up a little segment of my own... People, the Gringo is in the building!
han89
30-08-2005, 11:08 AM
good match christof, i really enjoyed it. it was brutal enough to start a heel title reign. good match. enjoyed reading it. :thumbsup
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