Summerslam Creative

[Darkstar]

OK, the current card for Summerslam is:

Elimination Chamber For The World Heavyweight Championship
Evil Gringo (c) Vs Draven Cage Vs Barry Gower Vs The Incredible Holt Vs Chris Eagles Vs Brett Banner

TWOStars Tag Team Championship
Lumberjack Match
The Dark Alliance (c) Vs Arkham and Retromark

TWOStars United States Championship
Tom Trash (c) Vs Jimmy Redman

Dante Mueller Vs C2K

The Judge vs Jordi Warner

TWOStars TV Title Match
PMA (c) vs Violent Vinnie Vengence Vs Tazz


More will be added as we go.

[Dante]

I got me vs C2K

[MrFill]

I think that everybody should know that I'm doing the Chamber


What's the deadline for the matches?

[Darkstar]

Friday, saturday at the VERY outside!

I already have the dante match in. ;)

[Boyo]

I can share the Tag Match with you Darkie. I don't have the tme to do it all as I have knee rehabilitation therapy to go to in the evenings.

All week.

Damned cruciate.

I'll do the first half if you want, and you can write the finish?

Cheers!

[Darkstar]

OK man.

[Jimmy Redman]

Im pretty sure I can do me vs Trash. PM me with stuff. :)

[Trash]

Put me over, Jimmy-lad...

[Jimmy Redman]

Shall try matey :)

[Rog]

I be doing Judge/Warner.

[Darkstar]

OK, its looking like a great card, lets get the matchs to me by friday if you can as my weekend will be fairly busy.

[MrFill]

TWOStars TV Title Match
PMA (c) vs Violent Vinnie Vengence Vs Tazz
I'm wondering who will be on commentary for this one

[Colin]

I'm wondering who will be on commentary for this one

Bob Backlund

[Jimmy Redman]

DS, I'll get mine to you either tomorrow morning, or very late tomorrow night, depending on when I finish it...

[Jimmy Redman]

Erm, just a heads up to say that my match will get to you sometime very late tonight (your time) I'm afraid. I'll have a few hours to finish it tomorrow morning (my time), it will probably be done by about midnight (your time). Sorry about that.

[MrFill]

I'm also running late because of work

I want to get it finished, so it could be late tonight or very early tomorrow - but it's the last part of the show, so at least it won't effect anybody else's match :P :D

[The B-Man]

I'm also running late because of work

I want to get it finished, so it could be late tonight or very early tomorrow - but it's the last part of the show, so at least it won't effect anybody else's match :P :D

BAH, you have had half the year to work on it. Ok well thats a bit much but nearly 2 months:P

[MrFill]

And work keeps on getting in the way of me doing it :P

[Boyo]

I've written only a very small part of the Tag Team Lumberjack match for the very reason that I have no idea what is supposed to be going down.

I'm not writing the finish, only the start, but I have no idea whatsoever who the lumberjacks are, whether Retromark is playing the part of the lumberjacks, whether the lumberjacks are faces and heels, or anything!

DS, send me a PM.

Cheers!

[Rog]

Will have the match sent later tonight.

[Darkstar]

Please do, I only have ONE in and Im getting a bit worried.

[Boyo]

You won't be getting my half of the tag match tonight unfortunately DS, bud. It will have to be tomorrow now due to only recieving the booking a couple of hours ago (not your fault, I know) and I can't write a match in such a short time.

Cheers!

[Darkstar]

ARRGGGHH! Well Baz has agreed to help write some and I will do the last page or 2. So if you do about 4/5 pages we are looking OK for a mid card match.

[Rog]

Match sent!!! Please forgive the time but bloody work kept me later than planned.

[MrFill]

SS Main Event PM'd to Darkie and Christof on the ex-rev because the TWO PM system sucks donkey balls :P

[Christof]

Damn good match fella

[Darkstar]

OK, I have the Chamber, Dante Vs C2K and Warner Vs the Judge. Come on guys, Im a busy boy and need to do teh show TODAY!

Redman, you sent me a blank email. :P

[Darkstar]

I now have Redmans match, still leaves the tag match and the TV title triple threat.

[Jimmy Redman]

Thank GOD for that! :P

[Telf]

Last I spoke with Col, he had something and seemed confident of getting it in on time

[MrFill]

Damn good match fella
Thanks :)

Yes, I actually worked up to 3am to get it done - problem is that I woke up at 7am to get more work done for a client :P

I wish I knew what the yawning emoticon was

[Colin]

Last I spoke with Col, he had something and seemed confident of getting it in on time

It'll be in tonight, got a brief set back. I was sure I'd have it in yesterday but it'll be in within the next hour or so.

[Colin]

Match in your hotmail inbox.

Heads up, it sucks.

[Telf]

Match in your hotmail inbox.

Heads up, it sucks.

If it's there dude, it's all good!

Cheers Colster! :thumbsup

[MrFill]

Where's the tag match?

Arkham gets bumped again? :cry

[Darkstar]

I have no idea Fill. I had been promised bits but nothing shows up! What can I do? Ah well. :(


GREAT show otherwise.

[Evil Gringo]

Great show, great main event and the reign of the Gringo is over...

Nice and brutal way to start the reign of King Holt though... Should be extremely intresting round here now...

[TGO]

Great show guys :) really enjoyed reading it

[Jimmy Redman]

Great, GREAT show everyone. LOVED the mainevent, one word....SWERVE~!

Damn, my picture of Tom Trash wont work. I edited it to have him carrying a trashcan and everything :(

[MrFill]

Glad you guys enjoyed the main event - I thought it went too quickly at times



And I realised with the tag match never got done - Boyo FEARS Arkham's friends :D

[The B-Man]

I have no idea Fill. I had been promised bits but nothing shows up! What can I do? Ah well. :(


GREAT show otherwise.

Even though I gave you 4 pages anyway:(

Edit: Good show overall nice start to the show and good Main Event. I see what Fill meant about it going quick at times and I would agree with that, but it was still Good:)

[han89]

can anybody comment my promo (the lonely avenger at the beginning of the show) because i care a lot about the experienced writer's comments so i can build experience in writing of my own...so what did you all think of it?

[The B-Man]

can anybody comment my promo (the lonely avenger at the beginning of the show) because i care a lot about the experienced writer's comments so i can build experience in writing of my own...so what did you all think of it?

Read above:)

[MrFill]

can anybody comment my promo (the lonely avenger at the beginning of the show) because i care a lot about the experienced writer's comments so i can build experience in writing of my own...so what did you all think of it?
It wasn't bad for someone without any efedding experience, but to be honest it was a little "wordy" for the paragraphs - try breaking it into smaller chunks and give some commentary from Cole & Tazz, plus some crowd reaction during your words

It makes it a lot easier to read, otherwise it seems like a "20 minute promo" from HHH :)

[han89]

It wasn't bad for someone without any efedding experience,
i never said i was with no e-fed experience...i said i was low on experience...i have been in minor and simple e-feds but i never was in one of the greatest e-feds on the net...lol...some of the people here are great writters...and you're one of them (summerslam main event...didnt read it yet..but it is great as i heard)

but to be honest it was a little "wordy" for the paragraphs - try breaking it into smaller chunks and give some commentary from Cole & Tazz, plus some crowd reaction during your words
i need nothing but your honesty :thumbsup

i will try to be less wordy next time...i intended in making it a big paragraph....that way it seems that the whole arena is quiet and no one is talking but him..and everyone is hearing him with complete silence....the crowd was ment to be silent and surprised....

as for the commentary things, will remember that later...

It makes it a lot easier to read, otherwise it seems like a "20 minute promo" from HHH :)
It is a 15 to 20 min promo..but it is never intended to look like HHH's ones...i was looking for the kane ones, when he had just taken his mask off..when he talked about shane and then lita and those promos....

i will try to improve my next promo so the readers would enjoy it!!!

i really apreciate your comments Mr. Fill...from the beginning in the training forum till know!!!

[MrFill]

By the HHH comment, most of his are boring as anything now - having the promo being too wordy in big chunks gives the impression that you're just rambling - unless that was the idea :)

[han89]

By the HHH comment, most of his are boring as anything now - having the promo being too wordy in big chunks gives the impression that you're just rambling - unless that was the idea :)

no it wasnt :lol

HHH is too wordy...

kane's promos used to be quiet...he would be the only one talking and the fans silent of fear or surprise and chok and the announcers are listening carefully..i am searching for such an efect....but i will cut thw wordy paragraphs from now on...LOL :lol

[Telf]

Absolutely fantastic show from what i've read (everything but for the chamber match)

I've never been one for enjoying reads through reems of long matches - but each one kept me interested, so congrats to all writers for that

Great stuff Col, loved the Atken stuff - although i was under the impression that PMA would be retaining........... but Trips now has a title :eek

[Colin]

Great stuff Col, loved the Atken stuff - although i was under the impression that PMA would be retaining........... but Trips now has a title :eek

Enjoy your title reign man :)

Anyway, glad you liked the match considering not much went on in terms of a match, I just thought "With Tazz in it, why not just have fun with it"

[han89]

the main event was great...i just finished reading summerslam...Mr. Fill i really enjoyed reading my first match written by you...it was one great match....i expected **** to win (so i dont spoil it for the ones who havnt read it yet) because it was clear somewhat...

the other matches were great also...i liked the triple threat for the TV championship...PMA is a great funny character and VVV is a nice mysterious one...Tazz was a good twist in the match...

those were my two favorite matches on this show..the others were good but notas good as the chamber..that was top!

[Dante]

To be fair to the rest of us, we don't ALL get a "Cold Unforgiving Steel Structure" to work with ;) Great show all in all guys, I hope my match was enjoyed by the general populus.

[MrFill]

Can I suggest that the tag match be done on this week's show? If there's already part of it done, it should be easier to finish

[Rog]

Bah WWE stole my finish, then again it was influenced by ECW Barely Legal.

[Boyo]

Can I suggest that the tag match be done on this week's show? If there's already part of it done, it should be easier to finish
Hi,

Sorry about the no-show. I had written about 8 pages, mainly just the intros to the ring and a few basic moves for Sickness and Retro but I have been in hospital most of this weekend, and now I am all "health & safety-ised" at work.

As some of you may be aware, back in March I tore my cruciate ligament in half, and tore my medial ligament in half, and have cartlidge floating around - all in my left knee.

I wrote much of the match on Friday night, and had planned to get it sent in to DS on Saturday afternoon, but my knee gave way on Saturday morning, getting out of the bath, and things have changed.

I now have to have a knee recontruction any time now.

About the tag match: let me restart it, let me write it all, and please can we just alter some of the bits and bobs in the match?

I know DS filled in with the Sickness being arrested story, and he thinks it's lame, but I'm sure we can work something awesome from that and then work that into another match in the next couple of weeks.

I'll have a word with DS about what we can do on this week's XTV to build the angle slightly, and then I can do that match. :)

Cheers!

[Christof]

A few things:

Really good PPV. Liking the Arkham angle, nice thinking on your feet DS.

Han - Please stop with the LOL's and ...'s. Please just use normal punctuation.

And Finally

Cheers to DS for booking me, it's now my turn to run with the ball, I'll try to give my best.