TWOstars XTreme TV 13 - May 19th

[Christof]

Ok folks, I will be starting the show at some stage tomorrow. Its pretty stacked because we have the King of the Ring to kick off



Wednesday:

King of the Ring Qualifier
Redman vs Trash - Trash writing

Thursday:

King of the Ring Qualifier
Arkham vs Mills - Spiral Tap writing

Friday:

King of the Ring Qualifier
Dammage vs VVV - Andy Telford writing

Saturday:

King of the Ring Qualifier
Assassin vs Omega Red - Dante writing

Sunday:

MAIN EVENT
Sam H (ERE) vs Darkstar: Sam H writing

As said earlier, I will open the show. If anyone wants to write, let me know so I can PM you the booking

[Evil Gringo]

Whats the champ gotta do to get a match!!!

Only joking, looks a good card and if there is any particular little things you want the Gringo to do during the show apart from what we've agreed before then drop me a line...

[Keith Jaxx]

I should be able to get a promo up sometime this week. May be the same video as last week, or maybe slightly different.

[Christof]

The champ should be doing HHH style 20 minute promos putting over yourself! Other than that go with the plans as previosuly discussed

[Trash]

Chris - aren't I supposed to be writing the Trash Vs Redman match?

[Christof]

yeah you are, good point

[Trash]

Can I have the booking too please? So I dont forget

[DC]

I'll cut a promo tomorrow about my qualification for KOTR, and what the consequences of beating Darkie will be.

[Ravenmark]

I have a promo to post that I'm sure people will like...

Heh heh

[Darkstar]

Looking forward to the show, whos starting Mr Holt?

[Christof]

Ok folks, I will be starting the show at some stage tomorrow.

As said earlier, I will open the show. If anyone wants to write, let me know so I can PM you the booking

No idea boss, :D

[Darkstar]

heheh, oops.

[Arkham]

I'm hoping to get a few promos in this show, maybe get some more crowd reaction as theyre getting used to me now

Also try to put some twist on the King of the Ring with my characters kind of antics

[Darkstar]

Enjoyed the promo Arkham......admittedly I expected this:

Arkham: Hello little man

to be

Arkham: Hello little girl

lol

[Rog]

I have a promo to post that I'm sure people will like...

Heh heh

Twas brilliant

[Christof]

loving both promos and as a booker I am really starting to appreciate the writing talents of some of our stars

[DC]

Ok Bub my first of two promos is up.

[Darkstar]

loving both promos and as a booker I am really starting to appreciate the writing talents of some of our stars


It makes one hell of a difference seeing it from this side doesnt it Christof!

[Trash]

I've finished writing my Jimmy Redman Vs Tom Trash KoTR Qualifier.

It'll be up tomorrow..if thats right

:idea

[Christof]

It makes one hell of a difference seeing it from this side doesnt it Christof!

yup it makes it both pleasing and frustrating in equal doses at times

[Arkham]

I hope that my work isnt frustrating you

Im trying to do more interesting stuff with my character, like getting the crowd more used to him before they begin cheering him properly

Im also taking the advice of people here to improve my work, and I think my last match was the best Ive done here

Although, I do know that I miss punctuation a lot, Im trying hard to get that better

[Christof]

No not at all Arkham, read my earlier post, I love the promos and the character development. I need to get on with some myself soon, TIH could do with another wrecking spree

[Trash]

Love the backstage skit Scott. Really made me laugh out loud. :lol

[MrFill]

Dante,

You have the crowd booing at something which hasn't been said:
Backstage a door is shown, with little light around it. The door opens and out walks Dante. The crowd cheers loudly for him. Grisham is there with a mic.

Grish-Dante I was wondering if I could have a couple quick questions.
Crowd boos at mention for Omega.
That's the top of your promo


Just a little thing :)

[Slim Jim]

They are a clever bunch this TWO crowd.

[MrFill]

And psychic by the sound of it :D

[Christof]

Lol, Fill I was just about to post that!

[Telf]

Apologies for the lateness of my first seg, just hard trying to find time when I'm not drunk or at the beach :P

[TGO]

Good promo Andy

[Darkstar]

Nice match Tom, I really enjoyed that one bud. :)

[Christof]

Really good match Tom, good effort

[Evil Gringo]

Just made my first foray into ERE and posted a beatdown/promo on Raw over there... any thoughts?

[MrFill]

Nice intensity, but one corrections, it's "raining" rather than "reigning" :) (your punches are coming down like rain)

I'll do a follow-up here soon

[MrFill]

Did it earlier than expected as it flowed better if I had you coming backstage :)

[Christof]

Nice promos EG. The one on TWOstars though, correct Christof to The Incredible Holt because Christof is the name of my ERE character not my TWOstars dude

[Evil Gringo]

Done and dusted Christof... oh I mean Holt.. Ermmmm You know what I mean...

Nice work Fill... I think One Night Stand is gonna be a corker...

[DC]

The show is shaping up well IMO......my decision is getting easier by the minute Bub. Ravenmark, Gringo and Fill.......fab work Bubs. :xyx

[Keith Jaxx]

Just posted a slight alteration to my video package.

[Darkstar]

Enjoying the show so far! looking forward to seeing what else you can all do. :)

[Jimmy Redman]

Great stuff Trash, well done.

Saz, Ive pm'd you regarding a promo...

[Christof]

Really good show so far chaps, lets make sure we keep up with the schedule as its a jam packed show - next weeks is even more hectic!

[Darkstar]

Just a quick promo to help get some of the Futures personalities across.

[Arkham]

I just did another little promo to show that Arkham doesnt quite get that Mafiamark is Tazzmark and theyre all Retromark

[DC]

I just did another little promo to show that Arkham doesnt quite get that Mafiamark is Tazzmark and theyre all RetromarkGreat idea Bub.......I've just posted my final promo about my decision I had to make...whatcha think?

[Christof]

DC = violent!

served a good purpose

[Jimmy Redman]

great, great seg DC, well done indeedo.

My promo's up and fixed.

And the Arkham/Retromark stuff is genius :worship

Can I also float an idea for me to do some statistics stuff, like win/loss records for TWO, like Chris2K does with WWE in the newsletter. What you think?

:brows

[Telf]

Can I also float an idea for me to do some statistics stuff, like win/loss records for TWO, like Chris2K does with WWE in the newsletter. What you think?

Nooooooo! Trips hasnt won since Wrestlemania!

[Christof]

Certainly Mr Redman, would be useful for booking as well!

[Christof]

Spiral Tap, your match was due yesterday, if it isn't up soon I will have to write something to replace it as it is delaying the show.

[Jimmy Redman]

Cool thanks. Im working on it now.

:brows

[Jimmy Redman]

Just a question: What happens when the ref does the *lift up their arm and let it drop 3 times* thingy? is it a submission? is it a no contest?

[Christof]

Submission

[Jimmy Redman]

Ok then. I have the standings so far from the start. Ill wait until after this week is finished. And after that I can post updates weekly, with results.

Where do I post it?

:brows

[Christof]

Create your own thread for it Jimmy, by all means, I need to announce the top ten soon as well

[Jimmy Redman]

In the shows forum I assume?

And I was wondering where your Top 10 went...

:brows

[Christof]

Nah stick it in Creative or help, the shows are for shows only

And yes the top ten will return

[Jimmy Redman]

Rightyo then. Thanks buddy :xyx

:brows

[Christof]

good promo JK

[johnny knoxvill]

Why thankyou. I was trying to play up a bit of cockyness.

[DC]

Why thankyou. I was trying to play up a bit of cockyness.If you wanna check the show....I just answered it....hope you don't mind Bub.

[Telf]

The Dammage vs Triple V match is gonna be up in 2 sections

1: Promo
2: Match

I'll post one after the other and (fingers crossed) should be up tonight at some point

[Christof]

Spiral Tap can follow it although at this rate I will be writing it

[Arkham]

Do you want me to write the match if Spiral Tap cant do it?

[Christof]

well Spiral Tap was ok to do it earlier in the week, if it isn't up by the end of today I will write something. You have already written more than enough this week Arkham.

[Arkham]

I dont mind doing it, and Ive only done 2 promos, so if you want me to I can do it

[johnny knoxvill]

Why am I always getting beaten the crap out of backstage thats like 4 times. Im getting payback next week.

[Christof]

JK its ok, it makes next weeks match easier to book and don't worry we'll be going through with the plans I advised you of after ONS.

[johnny knoxvill]

The match is next week. Okay I was gonna kick his ass backstage,but nevermind

[Fletch]

Amazing Andy Telford, got Dammage to a tee and made some phrases I love and shall be using. Cheers buddy, nice one

[MrFill]

Why am I always getting beaten the crap out of backstage thats like 4 times. Im getting payback next week.
It's all part of what goes on - I wrote myself getting beaten the crap out of this show

It all adds to the story - you can't have yourself "unstoppable" all of the time

[johnny knoxvill]

4 Times Kid. Im just saying its getting a bit repetitive. Run me over or take me out in the ring from the crwod or something.

[MrFill]

Problem is that you had already left the ring - if you had finished your promo in the ring then DC could have jumped you there, otherwise you'd have to walk back out again :P

[Rog]

If you wanna check the show....I just answered it....hope you don't mind Bub.

That was a fantastic segment, Im now a Draven Cage mark! Push the Hangman! :)

[Darkstar]

GREAT show guys! JK, best promo yet from you!

Really impressed with you as well arkham.

:)

[Arkham]

Thank you

Im enjoying the character and it helps having worked with Retromark

I hope to get a proper feud soon though

[johnny knoxvill]

Wow cheers mate.

[Trash]

I got an idea for Tom Trash - how about, we're backstage right, Trash is doing his "Your ass is TRASH" gimmick...and along comes Dominator...

And I totally beat the crap out of him!!!

What d'ya think?

[TGO]

Yeah then i pay the ERE locker room to finish the job LOL

Only kidding JK mate :xyx

[Jimmy Redman]

Great promo JK, well done buddy.

And good stuff Telford with Dammage. Nice match.

Draven Cage needs medication :P

:brows

[Telf]

Amazing Andy Telford, got Dammage to a tee and made some phrases I love and shall be using. Cheers buddy, nice one

Cheers Fletch, I gave the promo some thought but the match was kinda rushed so apologies if it was below standards

Keep this goin guys, we are getting some great character development which I hope will continue. TWOstars is by far the best efed I have participated in and many thanks to Darkie and especially Christof who have nothing but the best intentions for this fed.

PS - This was a drunken post in which I shall honour my own miss-punctuation - therefore, as promised I shall have a ciggie per fault, I wish you all the best of luck :thumbsup....... going to bed now......

[Jimmy Redman]

Keep this goin guys, we are getting some great character development which I hope will continue. TWOstars is by far the best efed I have participated in and many thanks to Darkie and especially Christof who have nothing but the best intentions for this fed.

I agree wholeheartedly. Its been top notch so far. Most of the matches have been really well written, and the promo work is fantastic. I think all of us have gotten better at writing as we've gone along. Personally, this is my first e-fed, and its been really fun, and also a learning experience. Big Big up to Darkie and Christof, both are doing an excellent job, great stuff. So, keep it up fellas!

:brows

[Darkstar]

Thanks guys, glad its been fun for you all. :)

[Ravenmark]

I may have been a bit promo heavy this week, but I like using Arkham in my work.

I know we're not supposed to be working together or whatever, but it just seems like a natural fit and it adds another dimension to my character.

The fact that I marked for people was a little 2 dimensional, as I could really have Retromark rip off another character every week. Having Arkham as my 'irritant' or whatever really helps develop Retromark's OWN personality as opposed to him taking on the personalities of others.

Man, I'm taking this WAYYYY to seriously.

Good work all round by everyone on the show and I was impressed with JK's promo too.

[Christof]

Good match Dante and thanks to Arkham for writing his match at very late notice. This week has again built on what we had before and with Mr Dammage back all is looking good.

Arkham I have a feud coming for you once ONS gets out of the way.

Glad everyone is enjoying the fed, thats what its all about at the end of the day

[MrFill]

JK, this week's promo was definitely your best work to date - notice that a lot of people have complimented you on it - NOW you can call it a good promo :xyx

Keep on improving them like this and your work may get to the "awesome" level you used before

[DC]

I'm loving working on this e-fed, and I can see everyone grow in confidence with each segment.....and Johnny, the promo was great, but my character wouldn't let you say those things without answering them......adnd if you read most of my antics.....I attack everyone backstage.....and since it's me and you next week, I have to attack you this week, to build your rage and intensity for next week.......we could have Todd Grisham interviewing me again, I go to attack him again, and you stop it and chase me away/kick my ass......or have you interviewed by Todd and he asks you about me, and you say things about how I can only beat you from behind (oo-er), and tonight face-to-face, man-to-man......Cage will pay....you know.......



EDIT - Just read Dante's match and if I can, I'd like to offer some constuctive criticism.......IMO, it seemed too one-sided......OR is 6'11" and a heel, so he should dominate most of the action IMO......makes it more special and heroic when you finally do advance.......just my opinion Bub, and if it is unwarrented then soz.

[TGO]

Just done a follow on from Arkham's post let me know if you liked it and Arkham good promo mate cheers for using my idea :xyx

[Christof]

Tgo can you remove the Arkham laughing part of the promo, it paints Arkham as devious and we all know (at least for the moment) that Arkham is too stupid for that.

The reason Arkham won by countout was not because of your great idea (though it is good). The match was scheduled to be posted on thursday by Spiral Tap, however by last night nothing had been posted so I gave Arkham the revised booking and asked him to write it. It would have been nice for Spiral Tap to have given some kind of pre warning that he wouldn't be able to write the match.

[Arkham]

Im trying to paint Arkham as being child-like in intelligence, and since hes with Retromark (or Mafiamark) this show, him laughing with The Judge does make him look too planning and so far hes not planned anything, ever

Ive been trying to keep everybody else in character and I think this doesnt do that with my character, sorry

[Arkham]

I have updated my profile to ensure people know his intelligence level

[TGO]

Ok sorry about that will change now

[TGO]

Tgo can you remove the Arkham laughing part of the promo, it paints Arkham as devious and we all know (at least for the moment) that Arkham is too stupid for that.

The reason Arkham won by countout was not because of your great idea (though it is good). The match was scheduled to be posted on thursday by Spiral Tap, however by last night nothing had been posted so I gave Arkham the revised booking and asked him to write it. It would have been nice for Spiral Tap to have given some kind of pre warning that he wouldn't be able to write the match.


Just read my post and i meant Paulrog not arkham lol
For some reason i thro Arkham was The Judge sorry about the mistake

[Darkstar]

The main event will be up late tonight and the next show will start tomorrow.

[Darkstar]

Sam couldnt do the match, but he did let me know via PM. So I just bodged the match together quickly, hope its lived up to XTV standards! :)