Xtreme TV #8- April 14th Creative

[Darkstar]

Wednesday
Draven Cage Vs Retromark: Ravenmark Writing

Thursday
Tag Team Title match
The Future (Trash and Holt) Vs Chris Vaille and Slim Jimm : Slim Jimm writing

Friday
Re Evolution Vs AC and Brian Dammage: Spiral Tap writing

Weekend
The Chav Vs V3 Vs Jimmy redman: andy telford writing

Ok I need takers for the Re evolution bout now. Ta. :)

BTW we are at the Cardiff Int arena this week.

[Ravenmark]

Is retroboy meant to be Retromark?

[Christof]

I would really appreciate someone else writing the tag match. i need to take a week off.

[Telf]

Darkie - I thought we arranged for Triple Threat between Chav, Triple V and Prototype for this week? :?

[Mark]

I'm writing a pre-show special at the moment. Can I post that first, as the first segment of the show?

[Darkstar]

Darkie - I thought we arranged for Triple Threat between Chav, Triple V and Prototype for this week? :?


OOps my bad, I have quickly changed the booking! I lost my sheet and had to go from memory! hence the mix up with Ravenmarks name! :P

And Sorry AC, I already started the show!

[Mark]

And Sorry AC, I already started the show!

No worries hombre - I'll stick it in a seperate thread. :xyx

[Ravenmark]

If DC doesn't mind, I'll have a go at writing our match...?

[Slim Jim]

AC, great documentary but did you have to steal my trade mark... Slim Jim is the man, the myth, the legend. Or I suppose now the Man, and half legend.

Edit. Unless Vaile or Trash want to write it I'll take the Tag Team match.

[Christof]

Sounds good Slim Jim, chuck me on ur msn when you are writing it if you need any help.

Can I make a request?

I would like to write a squash match for the Dominator against 2 jobbers at some stage, any chance JK and Darkie will allow me to do this?

[Mark]

AC, great documentary but did you have to steal my trade mark... Slim Jim is the man, the myth, the legend. Or I suppose now the Man, and half legend.

:oops It is supposed to be written by Acid too so mistakes can happen. ;)

Part two to be posted after a cr@ppy meeting at work. :evil

[Ravenmark]

I've posted the first match...

Thoughts/criticisms welcome.

[johnny knoxvill]

I would let you do that. And dont mean to be an ass its not The Dominator its just Dominator.

[Christof]

Dominator doesn't sound right in many passages of text so it becomes The Dominator as a result to make it sound correct.

[johnny knoxvill]

Whatever then

[Telf]

OOps my bad, I have quickly changed the booking! I lost my sheet and had to go from memory! hence the mix up with Ravenmarks name! :P

No worries dude, is it ok if I write the Triple Threat?

[Slim Jim]

We're two days ahead all ready. I'll post the tag match probably on wednesday.

[DC]

Well, I've just posted my first promo, so any feedback would be great.

Cheers Bubs!

[Fidel Cashflow]

Wednesday
Draven Cage Vs Retromark: Ravenmark Writing

Thursday
Tag Team Title match
The Future (Trash and Holt) Vs Chris Vaille and Slim Jimm : Slim Jimm writing

Friday
Re Evolution Vs AC and Brian Dammage

Weekend
The Chav Vs V3 Vs Jimmy redman: andy telford writing

Ok I need takers for the Re evolution bout now. Ta. :)

BTW we are at the Cardiff Int arena this week.
i'll write it, but if AC wants to i will bow down to his royalness.

[Fidel Cashflow]

Well, I've just posted my first promo, so any feedback would be great.

Cheers Bubs!
greatness!

id like to see where this goes

[Mark]

i'll write it, but if AC wants to i will bow down to his royalness.

You go ahead hombre! :xyx

[Telf]

Good stuff there DC - I can see a potential Hangman and Triple V alliance in the future :thumbsup

[Fidel Cashflow]

You go ahead hombre! :xyx
The great one has given me a right of passage!

[Christof]

The promo was very good DC. bringing alot of understanding to your character.

[Darkstar]

Loving the DC and Ravenmark promos! 2 VERY different guys, keep it up.

[Ravenmark]

AC - that Special you wrote was wicked mate! :xyx

I tried to rep you but it said I must spread my love around.

I did that and it still wouldn't let me rep you.

So, I spread a little more 'love'.

Still no reppage.

I guess me and my bookmarked sites are gonna be here all day...

[Slim Jim]

You just watch where you are spreading your love.

[Mark]

AC - that Special you wrote was wicked mate! :xyx

I tried to rep you but it said I must spread my love around.

I did that and it still wouldn't let me rep you.

So, I spread a little more 'love'.

Still no reppage.

I guess me and my bookmarked sites are gonna be here all day...

:D It probably makes the direction of the Eagles/Acid feud VERY obvious but it's wrestling, right? :lol

[Christof]

It was good AC, different style to our normal promo's. Well thought out and executed.

[Evil Gringo]

You know where it says Evil Gringo promo... can I actually slot one in there before anymore is added?

[Christof]

might as well fella. Was my promo ok? With the Future's new transport unveiled!

[Ravenmark]

might as well fella. Was my promo ok? With the Future's new transport unveiled!

Bang on, buddy.

[Christof]

Bit of feedback here for Slimjim

Please don't have The Incredible Holt roaring, either in pain or anger, The Incredible never makes a noise louder than a murmur, its all about the eyes and the intensity.

EDIT - on second thoughts can the roar of pain please be removed as it really weakens my character.

[Slim Jim]

What roars I see no roars.

Edit line, umm. Funny you should mention that.

[Christof]

he he he, cheers dude

[Evil Gringo]

Alright my promo's up... The Gringo again showing how twisted he is..

[DC]

Alright my promo's up... The Gringo again showing how twisted he is..Just a friendly warning but EVil Gringo should watch his back Bub. ;)

[Evil Gringo]

I'm ready for all challeges... And besides this is about fun... If you turn face or I go face or if the stars aline so that we fued I reckon it would be mucho fun...

[Christof]

was my promo ok, I felt I needed to get back some of the heat my character lost in the match

[Evil Gringo]

Yeah was some good black comedy between you and Trash and some excellent demolition work....

What about mine.. setting the stage nicely I hope for Backlash?

[DC]

I'm ready for all challeges... And besides this is about fun... If you turn face or I go face or if the stars aline so that we fued I reckon it would be mucho fun...Well, my character doesn't care about titles, I do care about causing pain, and your character is a prime target, so no heel turns, face turns or funny turns, just The Hangman seeking you (or anybody else out) and hurting them. Simple as that really. ;)

I've added a ickle confrontation between me and EG, a little bit o' fun if you will.

[Evil Gringo]

Nice to keep potential storylines open... good work DC.

[Christof]

i can see a hidendreich / snitsky still promo between Holt / Cage / Venegance soon.

[Telf]

Geeesh Chris! I was just writing up a draft for that for next week!

[johnny knoxvill]

Done my promo against Gringo tell me what you think and how it could be improved

[Mark]

Done my promo against Gringo tell me what you think and how it could be improved

Positive: When Dom' speaks it reads very naturally. Not naturally like a guy talking in the street, but you got a nice rhythm going with pauses for crowd response and the announcers to comment. :thumbsup Two thumbs up for that.

Negative: Firstly, run it through a spell checker. In fact, run it through a spell checker when you read this and edit your post.

Secondly, read through it and check for a few things. Make sure you're using the same format throughout. If Dom speaks it should say:

Dominator: Blablah

Put some commas in there. Every time you hear Dominator take a breath put a comma in. It just breaks up some longer sentances into more digestible chunks.

But overall, good work fella. :xyx

[Ravenmark]

Good promo JK.

I thought the saying Gringo can't speak and the reference to Mexico could be heelish, but other than that, good job.

[Mark]

Good promo JK.

I thought the saying Gringo can't speak and the reference to Mexico could be heelish, but other than that, good job.

Good point, well made. :lol

In your mind, Johnny, Dom's already an established star. You might want to make him a little more "face" and run with that for a while before you get too insulting to your opponents.

[johnny knoxvill]

I was going to try and get the Rock insult and the crowd on my side sort of character

[johnny knoxvill]

Also Raven considering the fans hating him I knew they were going to cheer because they hate him with such a passion

[Mark]

I was going to try and get the Rock insult and the crowd on my side sort of character

That's the feel I got but you need to remember that The Rock spent a fair while as a heel spouting his taunts and insults before he turned face.

[Christof]

Geeesh Chris! I was just writing up a draft for that for next week!

please don't go with my Teaparty idea

[Telf]

please don't go with my Teaparty idea

well that was an idea, but TBH i'm more hot on going with a childrens bedtime story being read by Holt/DC/VVV, either that or poetry

Actually thinking about it, I think I'll go with a some kind of a three tenor operatic number to introduce Backlash

[Christof]

nice!!!

I am having some fun with my current promos. Let me know if anyone wants me to stop.

[Telf]

Please go ahead, as long as they continue to amuse me

I've draft written the first half of the triple threat main event which has taken me the last couple of hours - its rather long for a 2 seg match but hopefully it will keep you entertained

That and the second seg will be posted seperately, one after the other around midday on sunday (or whenever I wake up with the inevitable sunday hangover)

[Evil Gringo]

The Gringo is hoping to draft a special pre Xtreme TV piece, kinda like the WWE behind the scenes DVD expose kinda deal on The Evil Gringo...

I'm hoping it will include intewrviews with Trash, Holt, Darkstar and anyother TWO stars that wish to contribute....

Either that or I was also thinking of building up Backlash with a look at me and the Dominator from childhood to now and are continued problems and history....

p.s.... How did I cheat AC out of the title belt? I got put through a table and kicked out of his finish, surely thats not cheating!?!?

[Christof]

A holt interview would be tough, being a mute and all.

Was my promo ok Gringo, with you getting angry and all? And more trailer park jokes

[Evil Gringo]

Perfect, will build up to next week and the run into backlash perfectly and helps with Trash's character as well....

And an interview could be funny... one grunt for yes, two for no and a punch for I'm done...

Could just set up more Holtish violence lol....

[Christof]

Holt speaks by means of an interpreter perhaps whom then gets beaten up!

[DC]

Nice promo's guys.

I've now left the arena in the show, but have left more questions than answers with a secret phone call....one that I had no idea the cameras had caught.

[Christof]

Your not plotting to steal the caravan are you????? :P I have plans for that!

[DC]

Your not plotting to steal the caravan are you????? :P I have plans for that!I know it's hard to believe, but I have bigger plans than stealing the caravan........although.......









........no, I'll stick with the original plan, which me, Mark (guy on other side of the phone) and the rest of the Dead Cell (tm) have arranged.

[Fidel Cashflow]

The Gringo is hoping to draft a special pre Xtreme TV piece, kinda like the WWE behind the scenes DVD expose kinda deal on The Evil Gringo...

I'm hoping it will include intewrviews with Trash, Holt, Darkstar and anyother TWO stars that wish to contribute....

Either that or I was also thinking of building up Backlash with a look at me and the Dominator from childhood to now and are continued problems and history....

p.s.... How did I cheat AC out of the title belt? I got put through a table and kicked out of his finish, surely thats not cheating!?!?
that's cool, Mills and Black canbe interviewed

[Ravenmark]

Also Raven considering the fans hating him I knew they were going to cheer because they hate him with such a passion

You knew they were going to cheer because you were writing it!

No-one cheers racism mate, thats the point i was making.

It was a good promo and it would have been fine without the mexican references.

EDIT: Interview Retromark, I'm sure I can think of something!

Cheers.

[johnny knoxvill]

I wasnt saying Mexico is ****. Im saying to Gringo go back there or your in trouble. And cause the fans cheer im the No.1 face going after the belt. Its like saying that Canada sucks like a many WWE superstar would say and people cheer when Im America or England but when your in Canada you say nothing!

Im supposed to add something else to my character so I didAs in humour.

Im supposed to be the guy who tells the TV peeps were to stick it.

[Ravenmark]

I know but having ago at Gringo because he 'can't speak' could be considered racist - thats all i was saying.

I said it was a good promo mate!

Don't look at the negatives!

[johnny knoxvill]

ALrite then. Instead of being angry throughout the whole promo like a normal big guy like myself normally is I tried to add a bit of a comedic edge.

And Saz great stuff! ( Saz got my promo)

[Ravenmark]

( Saz got my promo)

What is that supposed to mean?

All I've done is praise your promo.

I got it and part of it could be considered Racist or heelish and I'm not the only one to think so.

So give it a break Knoxvill, I praised you and you give me grief.

Sort yourself out - I was giving you positive feedback!

[Christof]

no 1 face?????? i think its safe to safe AC is the established no1 face, you are merely the no1 contender and that is only by default of Gringo beating you down

[Evil Gringo]

Thing is though the character is from England... The Mexican aspect is the fact that the Gringo was orignally an imaginary friend that took over the orignal Gringo (me) as he slipped further into his disturbed state....

They stole the idea off me for that crap DeNiro and Rebbeca Roijan Stamos film Godsend....

So in reality I can't move back to Mexico *** I've never been there lol.

[johnny knoxvill]

Im sorry Ravenmark went a bit OTT. And Christof I know im not N0.1 face but I gotta be N0.2. And I did not know Gringo was actually from England

[johnny knoxvill]

no 1 face?????? i think its safe to safe AC is the established no1 face, you are merely the no1 contender and that is only by default of Gringo beating you down

Your wrong on the last bit buddy!

[Ravenmark]

Im sorry Ravenmark went a bit OTT. And Christof I know im not N0.1 face but I gotta be N0.2. And I did not know Gringo was actually from England

I'm assuming that was 'Sorry Ravenmar' - not 'Sorry Ravenmark went over the top'.

:P

[Christof]

Your wrong on the last bit buddy!

how so, lets recap events, AC was surely due a rematch or something but this happened last week, written by a very talented good friend of mine

Dominator charges into the ring and runs at Holt but is met with a textbook….

MC: Spinebuster there from The Incredible Holt, who is straight back up to his feet

The camera pans to a close up of Holt who is just grinning with evil intent.

MC: Wait a minute Tazz, The Incredible Holt isn’t injured at all! He was just distracting the referee so that Trash could take out Brian Dammage.

Tazz: What did I tell you Cole, the guy is smart, he may not look it but the man knows what he is doing in the wrestling ring.

Holt picks the Dominator and Irish whips him into the ropes, before launching him high into the air with a big back body drop.

MC: The momentum really has shifted now Tazz, the match is in essence a 4 on 1.

Dominator gets back to his feet and his met with a running knee from Holt. Holt scoops Dominator up and plants him in the corner. He eyes the turnbuckle but decides not to attempt the elbow drop. Instead he picks Dominator up again and holds him over one shoulder. Running across the ring he plants Dominator into the mat with….

Tazz: Davey Boy Smith powerslam there Cole!

The crowd pop in recognition for one of their former greats

MC: Looks like the crowd loved that, here in the homeland of the legendary British Bulldog.

Holt signals to the crowd that the time is now

Tazz: This is the end now Cole!

MC: Oh my

Holt drags Dominator up to a vertical base a starts to pick him up into a suplex

Tazz: Incrediplex time Cole!

MC: No it isn’t Tazz; The Incredible Holt drives Dominator into the mat with his trademark suplex DDT.

Holt stalks Dominator

MC: Pin attempt from Holt

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2

Holt picks up the shoulder of the Dominator! He had him beat there Tazz, why would you prolong this match when you have the victory there for the taking?

Tazz: I dunno Cole; it would be like asking why you have a signed photo of Justin Timberlake in your locker room

Holt makes the gesture to his corner as to who wants in. He makes the tag to Trash, who instead of entering the ring stands on the apron, both hands on the top rope.

Holt picks up the Dominator, holds him high in a vertical suplex

Tazz: Now its time Cole!

Holt drives Dominator to the canvas with an Incrediplex

Tazz: Incrediplex Cole! Incrediplex!

Trash Leaps over the rope, spins the face the rope then jumps back up onto the rope and connects with a perfect...

MC: perfect Moonsault there from Tom “The Disciple” Trash, this one is over Tazz as referee Charles Robinson makes the count.


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2

Holt runs across the ring to prevent Acid Christ from interfering

3

Boo’s ring out across the arena.

Holt hits Acid Christ with a big boot to take him down to the floor from the apron.

Charles Robinson exits the ring to collect the title belts, he re-enters the ring. Raises the Future’s arms as they stand across the ring width.

TC: Here are your winners, The Future.

Referee Robinson leaves the ring, the four men stand there with arms raised, Trash is still holding the back of his head, Evil Gringo is staring at the Dominator, lying there on the canvas.

Gringo signals to the other three and they start to kick away at the Dominator who is defenceless.

MC: oh my it looks like the Future aren’t finished with the Dominator

Tazz: Well Evil Gringo hasn’t had his daily fix of pain yet.

Holt and Trash hold the Dominator up and Gringo smashes the Dominator across the face with his title belt. Dominator is busted open.

MC: This is despicable Tazz, someone needs to do something

Dammage gets to his feet and charges into the ring, Darkstar sees him coming however and uses his own momentum to send him back over the top rope on the other side.

Gringo orders Dominator back up, Dominator is on his knees, Gringo kicks him as Trash and Holt raise him to his feet again.

Trash is holding Dominator by the chin as Gringo gets in his face and talks trash to him. Gringo slaps him before having Dominator spun around. He hoists Dominator up on his shoulders

MC: There is no need for this, the match is already won

Referees start to streams down the ramp into the ring as Gringo hits the…

Tazz: Shock Therapy Cole, that’s Gringo’s trademark.

Gringo jumps on top of the Dominator and punches away at him, the three other men are now posing on the turnbuckles much to the derision of the crowd. Referees order them out of the ring and then remove Gringo from the Dominator.

MC: These shocking actions of The Future and our world champion Evil Gringo have injured another superstar. The Dominator has been busted open here and beaten.

Camera is now at ring level, zoomed in on the bloody wreck of the Dominator

MC: We’ll see you next week folks where we’ll find out what action will be taken against The Future.

Tazz: I can’t wait Cole.

Picture fades to TWOstars logo.


So you were outwitted by a big green dude, pinned by the trailer park's own Trash and then mutilated. So yes indeed you are No 1 contender by default not intention :P

[johnny knoxvill]

No Darkstar said I was gonna feud with Gringo and he told me and Gringo before hand. You dont think I would just challenge him at Backlash with out any backing would you?

[Christof]

kid I know how it works I knew in advance as well, the point is you are no 1 contender as a result of The Future handing your ass to you and you wanting revenge on Gringo. Its simple, got it?

[Ravenmark]

We knew the feud was gonna happen after the beatdown that Christof wrote.

I think what Christof was saying is that there are no 'strong' babyfaces - so you got the main event feud by default.

[johnny knoxvill]

I know that. I thought that you just thought that I put myself in the main event because I got jumped.

[Evil Gringo]

In a storyline sense you have.... But that happens in wrestling all the time so it makes sense...

Lets not split hairs over this eh?

[Darkstar]

I want to cry.....

[Mark]

I want to cry.....

Whassamatta? :?

[Darkstar]

Knoxville, dude,Im doing my best to help you without writing your stuff! I started the show with a way for you to write some damned good stuff as you could hunt Gringo! I push you to a main event slot to propel you to work with Gringo who is a great writer! Damn, I hope you have spoke to him aout where the fued is going and how! This is your chance to get to the top JK, use it, dont blow it!

Im having a week off, AC will be in charge next week!

[Mark]

Im having a week off, AC will be in charge next week!

Names in a hat time... :devil

[DC]

Names in a hat time... :devilJust let me know if you need/want me to do anything Bub.

[johnny knoxvill]

Ive done my promo. I havent ruined it this is the creative bit it dont get aired so stop worrying!

[Slim Jim]

One day you'll understand Johhny. One day...

[Telf]

Let me put my thoughts into this JK

1) Your character is far too strong, he doesnt seem to have any faults. He's VVV's size yet can perform a SSP better than London!? In the words of the Hurricane, whats up wit dat!?

2) This efed is supposed to be fun for all. When people give you points on your promo's, its constructive crticism to make for a better read show

3) Not that it matters to me at all, but your'e lucky Darkie's given you the title shot, if thats what you want, be grateful about it. This fed isnt all about wanting to be world champ, its about enjoying writing promo's and matches and reading other people's posts - following storylines etc.

4) Please note my immaculate spelling and punctuation. The use of full stops and commas makes this post easier to read, doesnt it?

[Christof]

yeahitmakesit so mucHeasier toread thanrad
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this

[TGO]

Im having a week off, AC will be in charge next week!


Eugene ran raw, AC run's TWO

Im thinking music and chair's lol

AC mate any chance of a title shot because i have the perfect match

US title match
Chav v MDM Chris Eagles v AC V Slim Jim v VVV v Jimmy Redman v Draven Cage
In a dead lion's match lol

only joking mate

[Christof]

I would like if possible to debut a new type of match sometime

Holt & Trash defend their title in a Trailer Park match, if the match gets the go ahead I'll explain the rules

[Telf]

The Triple Threat main event for this week will be posted in 2 parts. The 1st of which will be up some time this evening (saturday) then I'll post the 2nd part around midday tomorrow

If anyone wishes to post a promo, please do it before tonight. The shows had a fair few posts already which is good to see.

Spiral, we dont seem to have your match up yet, any chance you can post it this afty?

[TGO]

Spiral Tap pm'ed me asking of i could do match so i did a quickie hope it's ok as it's my first "real" match and only got told the booking at 15:16 lol so please let me know if it's ok

[johnny knoxvill]

I dont think my character is too strong I got beat the **** out of last week. And I am often considered Dumb by people writing and Tazz often refers too it also!.

I do take this as fun and have said I love the fact Im N0.5

I see this as a creative outlet for me THATS ALL!

[Telf]

First part of the main event is up, 2nd one tomorrow middayish - enjoy

I've tried to work on more of a story with this match, kind of setting the scene. Not too much mention of the wrestling technicalities but hope it makes for an enjoyable read

No posts on this show from now on please, cheers

BTW, cheers TGO for getting your match and promo up so quickly :thumbsup

[Rog]

Ah crap, thats what happens when you put off posting your promo until tommorow. Oh well, at least there is another show before Backlash, I can redeem myself.

[Telf]

Sorry paulrog, best thing to do is always remember to post before the weekend

[Trash]

Christof, your backstage caravan skit is awesome. Truely funny.

If you'd like me to do one next week then I'll go and do it.
I need to get some coursework out the way first, but I think I need to do another soon.
So get back to me please.

[TGO]

BTW, cheers TGO for getting your match and promo up so quickly :thumbsup

No problem mate just glad i was given the booking when i was about to do my promo or i wont have had time to do it

PS was match and promo ok for the match i just threw the match together and copy and pasted enterance's and wrote down some moves for each person in the match so let me know ok

[Telf]

Dude, if you put that together in a few hours that was a pretty damn good match - nice one

Second half of the match is now up, good show guys

[Mark]

Great main event - plenty of stuff going on and a nicely booked finish. :xyx

[Christof]

Great Main Event Telf, builds up the ongoing saga of Redman vs VVV.

[TGO]

Dude, if you put that together in a few hours that was a pretty damn good match - nice one

Second half of the match is now up, good show guys


And its was my first REAL match so thank you for liking it,

And your match was very good mate really enjoyed reading it

When next weeks booking's going up i know it sound's sad but i cant wait lol

[Slim Jim]

Well done TGO. You've taken a nice rounded off 100 post thread and ruined it.

[TGO]

Well done TGO. You've taken a nice rounded off 100 post thread and ruined it.


How have i

[Slim Jim]

In fact it wasnt you it was Christof.

[TGO]

In fact it wasnt you it was Christof.


Ok then ill let you off as thats a you meaning sorry


(i think not)

[Slim Jim]

I would never a apologize to you tgo

[Telf]

so if it wasnt tgo, what exactly has Christof ruined Slim?

[TGO]

why wouldnt you slim is it because your childish

[Darkstar]

Ok, first closed creative thread.............